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God of Jacob
Keep your mind on God;
and he will not fail you,
In the Soul is Gold for the Spirit,
your blessing, is him, and he will prevail.
Be still, Be Patient;
And always remember.
There is pleasure in sin for a season
But The Lord Awaits for you in Heaven,
Under the sun,
Is Earth
And all of its deeds,
But to the Heaven's,
Is God's Glory,
And forever it shall be.
and he will not fail you,
In the Soul is Gold for the Spirit,
your blessing, is him, and he will prevail.
Be still, Be Patient;
And always remember.
There is pleasure in sin for a season
But The Lord Awaits for you in Heaven,
Under the sun,
Is Earth
And all of its deeds,
But to the Heaven's,
Is God's Glory,
And forever it shall be.
Published 5th Aug 2013
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5th Aug 2013 7:42am
Just going to make you aware of some spelling errors! :)
In line 6, "remeber" should be "remember."
In line 7, I believe you meant to say "reason" instead of "season."
and In line 11, "it's" doesn't need an apostrophe.
A great religion based poem though. Wonderful job!
Merry Cheers!!!
In line 6, "remeber" should be "remember."
In line 7, I believe you meant to say "reason" instead of "season."
and In line 11, "it's" doesn't need an apostrophe.
A great religion based poem though. Wonderful job!
Merry Cheers!!!
5th Aug 2013 8:23am
Thank you for pointing out the punctuation and spelling error's i fixed them :P and i did mean to put season, it's actually in the bible that verse in this one, it goes "Choosing rather to suffer affliction with the people of God, than to enjoy the pleasures of sin for a season"
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