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RELEASE ME
No more holding back
Not one second longer
Silent and hidden inside
The gasp of your desire
Flows from your lips
You feed on my passion
While I grow on your lust
Submit to this, open up to me
And let me feast on your longing
I’ll take all the time you need
Promise you
The fire is burning
It will be blasphemous
Not one second longer
Silent and hidden inside
The gasp of your desire
Flows from your lips
You feed on my passion
While I grow on your lust
Submit to this, open up to me
And let me feast on your longing
I’ll take all the time you need
Promise you
The fire is burning
It will be blasphemous
Published 27th Jul 2013
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27th Jul 2013 8:48pm
Anticipation--Tempered With--Patience....
While lust and passion intensify...("...You feed on my passion/While I grow on your lust....")
I mean,how could the final culmination be anything but 'blasphemous'??? (IKR)
(MMmmm....MMmmm...has left me longing.......<3
Well penned!
While lust and passion intensify...("...You feed on my passion/While I grow on your lust....")
I mean,how could the final culmination be anything but 'blasphemous'??? (IKR)
(MMmmm....MMmmm...has left me longing.......<3
Well penned!
Anonymous
27th Jul 2013 9:55pm
You got this passionate and sexy write perfect. Mmmmm! :)
