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You Are
You are constellations made from fireflies,
Folded pages and underlined phrases
in my favorite book,
You are coffee and cream,
My awakening.
Folded pages and underlined phrases
in my favorite book,
You are coffee and cream,
My awakening.
Published 27th Jul 2013
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27th Jul 2013 5:30am
27th Jul 2013 5:48am
27th Jul 2013 2:03pm
Perhaps the shortest piece I've ever read of yours, it's punchy and I like it. You are great with metaphors and imagery, and I love the way you seemed to almost list them here. It is a beautiful piece.
15th Aug 2013 3:21pm
