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Haiku...III
ADRASTIA
Harsh screams pierce the night
On your breath I taste the blood
She has claimed your soul
Author's Notes:
Just for fun, I entered this piece in the Haiku Competition.
Adrastia means 'inescapable.'
Published 26th Jul 2013
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26th Jul 2013 9:48am
Like the theme! My entry Carpathian twilight has a similar taste I think.. ;-)
Lovely in so few words. Great work!
Lovely in so few words. Great work!
26th Jul 2013 2:47pm
i am honored by your visit, and your generous words of praise!
Thank you for taking the time to read, and comment on my poem...so appreciated. i am glad that you enjoyed it.
Thank you for taking the time to read, and comment on my poem...so appreciated. i am glad that you enjoyed it.
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26th Jul 2013 8:35pm
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26th Jul 2013 9:00pm
Gabriel, my friend, thanks for reading, and commenting. i am ever soo appreciative. <3
You made me smile! xo
You made me smile! xo
26th Jul 2013 8:44pm
26th Jul 2013 9:26pm
Jasper,
It's faithful followers, like you, that lift my spirits, and let me know that in small way, my poetry is appreciated!
Thank you, so very much, my Friend <3
It's faithful followers, like you, that lift my spirits, and let me know that in small way, my poetry is appreciated!
Thank you, so very much, my Friend <3
30th Jul 2013 5:25am
Adrastia is also the nymph associated with childbirth, so your use of it suggests that one is reborn into another life (death) as the soul is claimed. Great blending of modern and ancient mythology.
5th Aug 2013 00:11am
Aahhh...you are the f i r s t to have understood the subtle, double meaning to my piece....this has truly made me smile!
Thank you for taking the time to read, and appreciate my work....i am ever soo grateful!
Thank you for taking the time to read, and appreciate my work....i am ever soo grateful!
Keep writing and I will keep reading.
Enchant me with darkness and I may yield...
Enchant me with darkness and I may yield...
10th Aug 2013 5:36am
10th Aug 2013 5:46am
Rain,mo cara,
You have honored, and humbled me with your comments!
Your reviews always mean so very much to me!
Thank you !
You have honored, and humbled me with your comments!
Your reviews always mean so very much to me!
Thank you !
25th Aug 2013 9:23pm
great job here Miss, be nice to see you break into the longer writes now n again, you're ideas for writes are very strong.
shine on
shine on
25th Aug 2013 9:34pm
Awww, Eamon, mo cara,
You have inspired me, to be certain!
Thank you, ever so much, for your generous,encouraging words...they really mean a great deal to me.
You have inspired me, to be certain!
Thank you, ever so much, for your generous,encouraging words...they really mean a great deal to me.
21st Sep 2013 6:07pm
21st Sep 2013 6:21pm
I thank you, ever so much, for taking the time to read my Haiku, and for your gracious comment! I accept both, with humble gratitude!
I am always glad, to be certain, whenever i have a new visitor to realm. Thank you for visiting.
ALL most, appreciated!
I am always glad, to be certain, whenever i have a new visitor to realm. Thank you for visiting.
ALL most, appreciated!
24th Sep 2013 4:03am
i love this poem, its so nice
please keep writing and i will keep reading them
please keep writing and i will keep reading them
24th Sep 2013 4:12am
I thank you so very much for your kind, and encouraging comments!
I am glad that you enjoyed my Haiku! I am always happy to welcome a new reviewer into my realm!
Thanks for stopping by!
Sioch`ain leat, mo cara nua,
Enchantress
I am glad that you enjoyed my Haiku! I am always happy to welcome a new reviewer into my realm!
Thanks for stopping by!
Sioch`ain leat, mo cara nua,
Enchantress
