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Pain slut
Love has taken my heart,
right to the grave.
Where I'll always be tortured,
hurt, and enslaved.
The chains on my neck,
keep me bound to this floor,
Screaming,' Please beat me, Mommy I'm torn.
What a sick little masochist,
I've turned out to be.
Happy content with,
this love you show me.
The devil takes notes,
as he stands by my side,
You're. A sick fucking man,
Wade, the devil replied.
Why must I like,
this feeling of pain?
Are you showing me love,
in your tortures ways?
Keeping me here
all tied to the wall.
I'd rather have sick love,
then no love at all..
By darkheartmagic
© 2011 darkheartmagic (All rights reserved)
right to the grave.
Where I'll always be tortured,
hurt, and enslaved.
The chains on my neck,
keep me bound to this floor,
Screaming,' Please beat me, Mommy I'm torn.
What a sick little masochist,
I've turned out to be.
Happy content with,
this love you show me.
The devil takes notes,
as he stands by my side,
You're. A sick fucking man,
Wade, the devil replied.
Why must I like,
this feeling of pain?
Are you showing me love,
in your tortures ways?
Keeping me here
all tied to the wall.
I'd rather have sick love,
then no love at all..
By darkheartmagic
© 2011 darkheartmagic (All rights reserved)
Published 25th Jul 2013
| Edited 29th Jul 2013
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25th Jul 2013 7:54pm
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25th Jul 2013 8:03pm
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25th Jul 2013 8:31pm
Hehe its funny but most people don't really tell you what they truly like lol thanks for the comment.
Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 6:18am
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26th Jul 2013 1:51pm
Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 3:49pm
Very dark, twisted, a lot of pain,
pain it seems that one thinks they
deserve.
pain it seems that one thinks they
deserve.
26th Jul 2013 5:00pm
27th Jul 2013 6:43pm
No pain, no gain is a favorite saying...I dig it!
I love these lines:
I'd rather have sick love,
then know love at all..
But, do you mean:
I'd rather have sick love,
than no love at all.. (just askin')
I love these lines:
I'd rather have sick love,
then know love at all..
But, do you mean:
I'd rather have sick love,
than no love at all.. (just askin')
29th Jul 2013 1:45pm
29th Jul 2013 8:39pm
29th Jul 2013 10:07pm
The devil takes notes,
as he stands by my side, !!!
well now...hope he learned something
as he stands by my side, !!!
well now...hope he learned something
Anonymous
5th Aug 2013 7:32am
Well put, everyone needs love its not always the right kind but at least its love. And did you teach the devil anything new? :)
5th Aug 2013 2:41pm
Anonymous
5th Aug 2013 4:51pm
great answer
12th Aug 2013 4:13am
9th Dec 2013 6:02am
Its too often that people forget the weeks that exists in a single drop of blood, forget that discovery is found in its color, hope in the agony ripped from its birth. You’ve written an unearthing rich in burgundy grief and wary aching. The rhythm flows splendidly and the message is brutally honest. An anguish ridden piece that flowers out with an invitingly sympathetic aroma.
10th Dec 2013 6:29am
13th Dec 2013 2:28pm
I'm caressing the fine line between pleasure and pain as read this... Nice inking:)
16th Dec 2013 9:03pm
Thank you so much I didn't know you was on this site as well. nice to see you here.
19th Dec 2013 6:02pm
