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Lie To Me.
Tease me, please me,
Take my breath away.
Love me, need me, lie to me,
Promise that you'll stay.
Don't break down the illusion,
Don't take my ignorance away.
Let me believe that you want me,
Let me pretend that you care.
Hold me, kiss me,
Leave goose bumps on my skin.
Dont take me away from this high,
Im just too far in.
Dont take off your mask dear,
Please dont validate my fear,
Just hold me close
And whisper those sweet lies
In my ear.
Take my breath away.
Love me, need me, lie to me,
Promise that you'll stay.
Don't break down the illusion,
Don't take my ignorance away.
Let me believe that you want me,
Let me pretend that you care.
Hold me, kiss me,
Leave goose bumps on my skin.
Dont take me away from this high,
Im just too far in.
Dont take off your mask dear,
Please dont validate my fear,
Just hold me close
And whisper those sweet lies
In my ear.
Published 20th Jul 2013
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21st Jul 2013 7:29am
A good flow, generally.
"Don't take my ignorance away."
I don't believe you need the above line, though. Just my opinion.
"Don't take my ignorance away."
I don't believe you need the above line, though. Just my opinion.
21st Jul 2013 10:38am
For the way i was feeling when i wrote it, its kind of an important line, it also goes along with the way i used a 2 sentence pattern. Thank you ill keep it in mind when i write again soon, thanks for reading:)
