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revenge will be mine
tear open arteries and release the wine,
destroy something that once was mine,
keep playing those games with my head,
make me wish I was in my grave dead,
it's time for your monstrousity to leave,
for you I shall not ever grieve,
I shall enjoy my vengeance it shall taste sweet,
i'm sure you'll regret ever messing with me!
destroy something that once was mine,
keep playing those games with my head,
make me wish I was in my grave dead,
it's time for your monstrousity to leave,
for you I shall not ever grieve,
I shall enjoy my vengeance it shall taste sweet,
i'm sure you'll regret ever messing with me!
Published 6th Dec 2010
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7th Dec 2010 6:28pm
7th Dec 2010 8:12pm
17th Dec 2010 11:58am
I believe that it's a powerful dark and yet motivating poem. The true quality that I enjoy about your poems is that they sound to me as if the events actually occured to you and your expressions are so vivid and powerful that each line overhere is a punch (might be to your ex-boyfriend who actually ditched). The rhyming is too adorable and despite of the angst which is the background in the poem, the rhyming refrain keeps the reader smiling frequently. The opening line with that artery and wine is your mastercraft. Well done again Sarah!
18th Dec 2010 8:04am
thank you very much anadosen, your feedback is always greatly appreciated :)
and yes the events actually occurred, this is to why i created this particular poem; out of anger.
haha my opening line is my favourite piece of this poem :) thank you again; i'm glad you enjoyed my poem x
and yes the events actually occurred, this is to why i created this particular poem; out of anger.
haha my opening line is my favourite piece of this poem :) thank you again; i'm glad you enjoyed my poem x
13th Jul 2013 2:37am
