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Strung Out and A Lit Cigarette
Relax.
Drugs course through collapsing veins
Euphoric just like heaven
Sparks of a lighter;
Nicotine fix
See the calm coagulate
Filthy spoons, familiar syringe
Powdered table tops
Burned the carpet floors
Curtains drawn
What is the sun?
Lampshades, the dimmest light
The crimson glow as ashes grow
Head thrown back;
Sigh.
Inhaling the last line
Track marked, scarred
Smoke clouds upon exhale
A chair that never moves
For a junky can't take change
Drugs course through collapsing veins
Euphoric just like heaven
Sparks of a lighter;
Nicotine fix
See the calm coagulate
Filthy spoons, familiar syringe
Powdered table tops
Burned the carpet floors
Curtains drawn
What is the sun?
Lampshades, the dimmest light
The crimson glow as ashes grow
Head thrown back;
Sigh.
Inhaling the last line
Track marked, scarred
Smoke clouds upon exhale
A chair that never moves
For a junky can't take change
Published 20th Jul 2013
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20th Jul 2013 11:16am
Can't say this isn't a very disturbing image
But I can't say it wasn't exceptionally depicted
in graphic detail either... Here's hoping its just your
talent imagining this scene n NOT you actually defining you
truly did this :(
But I can't say it wasn't exceptionally depicted
in graphic detail either... Here's hoping its just your
talent imagining this scene n NOT you actually defining you
truly did this :(
20th Jul 2013 11:19am
It was inspired by a movie, no reality here, I can proudly say I have been drug free for a month and a half now :)
21st Jul 2013 4:34am
Very detailed and visual! Felt like I was in the room shooting up as well. Very well written! Exceptional job! :D
21st Jul 2013 4:36am
21st Jul 2013 4:48am
well it's definitely awesome to have you back! I was wondering where you went haha I'm glad to see you on again and with wicked amazing writes! :D
21st Jul 2013 4:50am
Glad your back to! Great way to return, with your stuff! My inspiration has returned!
21st Jul 2013 2:47pm
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