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It's been too long
It's been too long
I need it now
I don't care when
I don't care how
It's been too long
I'm feeling quite vex
I am feeling quite grumpy
I am wanting some sex
It's been too long
I have waited two weeks
I need some relief now
I need your expert techniques
It's been too long
I cant wait any more
I'll take it right here
I'll take it on the floor
It's been too long
I want as much as I can get
I want you to make me scream
I want you to make me sweat
It's been too long
I want to make up for lost time
I want to feel you inside of me
I think waiting any longer would be a crime!
I need it now
I don't care when
I don't care how
It's been too long
I'm feeling quite vex
I am feeling quite grumpy
I am wanting some sex
It's been too long
I have waited two weeks
I need some relief now
I need your expert techniques
It's been too long
I cant wait any more
I'll take it right here
I'll take it on the floor
It's been too long
I want as much as I can get
I want you to make me scream
I want you to make me sweat
It's been too long
I want to make up for lost time
I want to feel you inside of me
I think waiting any longer would be a crime!
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Re: It's been too long
20th Jul 2013 2:50am
re: Re: It's been too long
20th Jul 2013 3:07am
Re: It's been too long
20th Jul 2013 3:09am
Kinda' an punishment to your body and soul when it's been too long! Wonderful Read, Deb!
Glad to see you back! Xo
Glad to see you back! Xo
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re: Re: It's been too long
20th Jul 2013 3:15am
punishment for sure
thanks
thanks for your kind words, feels good to be back
btw...love your profile pic xo
thanks
thanks for your kind words, feels good to be back
btw...love your profile pic xo
Re: It's been too long
20th Jul 2013 3:52am
re: Re: It's been too long
23rd Jul 2013 9:24pm
Re: It's been too long
A strong, bluntly written, between-couple yearning piece. The eagerness apparent in both poem and pic.
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re: Re: It's been too long
23rd Jul 2013 9:25pm
Re: It's been too long
20th Jul 2013 6:50pm
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23rd Jul 2013 9:25pm
Re: It's been too long
21st Jul 2013 3:14pm
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