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smother
day has gone and turned into night. as i sit here basking in the glow of the street light. with a cigarette in one hand and my pen in the other. with my thoughts and my ink these page i will smother. not knowing or caring what the next line will bring. just sitting here listening to the dragonflies sing.
Published 19th Jul 2013
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19th Jul 2013 4:48am
Very good. Straightforward and deftly composed. Simplicity of form and rhyme scheme belay a depth of meaning-so much more left unsaid but all the more compelling because of it.
20th Jul 2013 7:23pm
thank you, there was more . however the words started come from my head and not my heart. if i have to work at writing it loses its intrigue .
