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I Believe In Lies~
Tasting that poison again
from betrayed lips
sucking on each word
that rolls off a slippery
tongue
it's bitter sweet
I always come back for
more never knowing
why other than
wanting to taste
that tainted
habit
it's pain is comforting
just as I begin to recover
that urge grabs me
and a bit of truth seeps
in and mixes with
the toxic lies
it's truth sinks to the bottom
I open up with ease
and expand around that
false piece of
happiness and await
the next drop
of hope to exit
that slick
tongue
from betrayed lips
sucking on each word
that rolls off a slippery
tongue
it's bitter sweet
I always come back for
more never knowing
why other than
wanting to taste
that tainted
habit
it's pain is comforting
just as I begin to recover
that urge grabs me
and a bit of truth seeps
in and mixes with
the toxic lies
it's truth sinks to the bottom
I open up with ease
and expand around that
false piece of
happiness and await
the next drop
of hope to exit
that slick
tongue
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Re: I Believe In Lies~
Could be portrayal of a woman who 'comes back for more' (sex or just company) from an untrustworthy man.
Stylistically I like the erotic undertones in the last verse.
Stylistically I like the erotic undertones in the last verse.
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re: Re: I Believe In Lies~
18th Jul 2013 9:25pm
Re: I Believe In Lies~
Anonymous
18th Jul 2013 9:31pm
You fall for lies...naaaah...I don't believe it :) Two lines that struck:
"Its pain is comforting" It's a sad day when pain, because of its either predictability or dependability, become a comfort...been there
"It's truth sinks to the bottom" It's a super sad day when we overlook or avoid the truth because the pain and lies have become habitual
Damn if you didn't get me to think...it hurts ;D
"Its pain is comforting" It's a sad day when pain, because of its either predictability or dependability, become a comfort...been there
"It's truth sinks to the bottom" It's a super sad day when we overlook or avoid the truth because the pain and lies have become habitual
Damn if you didn't get me to think...it hurts ;D

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re: Re: I Believe In Lies~
18th Jul 2013 9:34pm
Painful truth for a shit load of people, I'm sure!
You got the "brain pain " my friend...LMFAO!
Don't think too much!
You got the "brain pain " my friend...LMFAO!
Don't think too much!
re: re: Re: I Believe In Lies~
Anonymous
18th Jul 2013 10:03pm
But I can't help it...it's a painful addiction ;)

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Re: I Believe In Lies~
19th Jul 2013 00:03am
re: Re: I Believe In Lies~
19th Jul 2013 00:14am
Re: I Believe In Lies~
19th Jul 2013 2:28am
Sounds like you're addicted to the misery.. Do you enjoy the sensation of pain? Read my poem emo love and tell me what you think..
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re: Re: I Believe In Lies~
19th Jul 2013 2:32am
Re: I Believe In Lies~
Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 3:11am
All of us do tl...a real write...
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