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She Vamp~
Darkness turns to light
as the sun swallows the
shadows that covered
me in silence
I take my fearful catch
to the cellar where he
will serve me well
as I feast on
his mortal flesh
I rejoice in his pain as
his blood trickles
over my lips
my ravenous hunger
pierces him again
and again
absorbing his passion
while fulfilling my
pleasure I drain him
until his peachy
skin turns ashen
He enters my cold body
filling my insides
with warmth
and I'm dripping with
crimson delight
as the sun swallows the
shadows that covered
me in silence
I take my fearful catch
to the cellar where he
will serve me well
as I feast on
his mortal flesh
I rejoice in his pain as
his blood trickles
over my lips
my ravenous hunger
pierces him again
and again
absorbing his passion
while fulfilling my
pleasure I drain him
until his peachy
skin turns ashen
He enters my cold body
filling my insides
with warmth
and I'm dripping with
crimson delight
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Re: She Vamp~
16th Jul 2013 7:11pm
A willing victim acts on his own purposes, begging the question, led or leading?
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17th Jul 2013 3:41am
Re: She Vamp~
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 7:16pm
Tommie,
Now that was bloody erotic! ; )
tornado
Now that was bloody erotic! ; )
tornado
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17th Jul 2013 3:41am
Re: She Vamp~
Anonymous
- Edited 17th Jul 2013 00:44am
16th Jul 2013 7:51pm
Eeeeeew Gross! ;)
I am really enjoying the variety you been producing lately. I love the vivid descriptions in this one. The one that struck me most is:
"I drain him
until his peachy
skin turns ashen"
Well done amiga mia!:)
I am really enjoying the variety you been producing lately. I love the vivid descriptions in this one. The one that struck me most is:
"I drain him
until his peachy
skin turns ashen"
Well done amiga mia!:)
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re: Re: She Vamp~
17th Jul 2013 3:43am
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Anonymous
17th Jul 2013 5:26am
I, at first, just wrote the eeeeewwww gross and I LMAO...I'm so easily entertained ;)
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Re: She Vamp~
16th Jul 2013 7:59pm
re: Re: She Vamp~
17th Jul 2013 3:43am
Re: She Vamp~
16th Jul 2013 10:08pm
"I take my fearful catch
to the cellar where he
will serve me well
as I feast on
his mortal flesh,"
Very seductive.
Flesh/desires do taste so good to eat on.
Nice dark write, Tommy... Pan
to the cellar where he
will serve me well
as I feast on
his mortal flesh,"
Very seductive.
Flesh/desires do taste so good to eat on.
Nice dark write, Tommy... Pan
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17th Jul 2013 3:45am
Re: She Vamp~
Anonymous
17th Jul 2013 2:41am
Great vampire write tl!
Strider...
Strider...
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17th Jul 2013 3:45am
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17th Jul 2013 5:07am
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21st Jul 2013 4:39am