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upon waking
there's a moment
while passing through the gateway
that I become nothing
without out thought
without substance
without ego
it's where life begins and ends
I'm revisiting conception
and previewing where we last breathe
in that other world
I am still nothing
I always will be
while passing through the gateway
that I become nothing
without out thought
without substance
without ego
it's where life begins and ends
I'm revisiting conception
and previewing where we last breathe
in that other world
I am still nothing
I always will be
Published 2nd Dec 2010
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2nd Dec 2010 12:25pm
2nd Dec 2010 2:50pm
i prefer imaging i become nothing rather than part of everything.. i much prefer the idea of oblivion to eternity.. glad you dig the poem :)
2nd Dec 2010 3:02pm
2nd Dec 2010 3:32pm
3rd Dec 2010 00:34am
Is "without out thought" a typo or did I miss the intention? Either way a great piece. I find it fascinating, but of no surprise, that you favor oblivion to eternity. These two lines really took me by surprise: I'm revisiting conception
and previewing where we last breathe. Loved it.
and previewing where we last breathe. Loved it.
3rd Dec 2010 3:18pm
yeah it was a typo thanks for letting me know.. its kinda like having a booger in your nose it nice when people tell you so you can take care of it and not walk around with it all day ;) glad you dug the poem bro!
