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come closer
so I can
get
a look at you
pull your seat in here
closer
to the fire
you'll get a heat
so how've you been
since
last
we
met
?????
so I can
get
a look at you
pull your seat in here
closer
to the fire
you'll get a heat
so how've you been
since
last
we
met
?????
Published 30th Nov 2010
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30th Nov 2010 4:30pm
this is adorable. i'm only guessing it's an awkward moment between old friends (or used-to-be more than friends). but it's a good capturing in that context for sure with the structure, title, and content all together. i like it a lot! [:
30th Nov 2010 6:49pm
