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Finger Banging
The minute I saw him I wanted him
I had to have him near me, touching
his hands undoing my buttons
his eyes looking into mine
Each button he popped sent me into
a feverish frenzy, I just wanted
him to rip my blouse off
cup my leopard print covered
breasts in his strong hands
Slowly descending his hands over
my waist, past my hips than in
between my peachy thighs
feeling my heat
Leopard print undies between
his fingers and my moisture
tugging them to the side
than giving me two
fingers
His tongue circling my now
exposed pink nipple, sucking
on it while his fingers
dance inside me
Like a magic man he makes
me cum, honey dripping
down his fingers, he removes
them and I suck them
I had to have him near me, touching
his hands undoing my buttons
his eyes looking into mine
Each button he popped sent me into
a feverish frenzy, I just wanted
him to rip my blouse off
cup my leopard print covered
breasts in his strong hands
Slowly descending his hands over
my waist, past my hips than in
between my peachy thighs
feeling my heat
Leopard print undies between
his fingers and my moisture
tugging them to the side
than giving me two
fingers
His tongue circling my now
exposed pink nipple, sucking
on it while his fingers
dance inside me
Like a magic man he makes
me cum, honey dripping
down his fingers, he removes
them and I suck them
Written by
tommielynn
(Tommie Lynn)
Published 8th Jul 2013
| Edited 9th Jul 2013
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Re: Finger Banging
Anonymous
8th Jul 2013 9:53pm
That's a hot write tl....
strider!
strider!
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2013 1:50am
The look, the feel of leopard print the fabric of our lives ;) A reason for excitement...thank you!
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2013 5:34pm
Now if I could just crack you open...what too much ;) I'll settle for cracking you up and down and all around :P
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9th Jul 2013 3:59am
What is with leopard print?- bc mi reina loves it too lol ... and pandas -
... Sexy write! Tommie
... Sexy write! Tommie
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9th Jul 2013 6:39am
Animal print - a symbol of the wild (in more than one sense). Like way it is worked in (so to speak).
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9th Jul 2013 1:04pm
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Shit this dude was either crazy or TOO generous!
becuz I'd be licking them fingers! Well actually I'd share ur honey with u! lol hott hott spill lady :)
becuz I'd be licking them fingers! Well actually I'd share ur honey with u! lol hott hott spill lady :)
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9th Jul 2013 2:01pm
At first I was thinking of something related to a musical instrument! (laugh) Guess with a guy like this the involvement of the manhood is an added plus.
One correction I might suggest is change "seen" to "saw" in the first line.
Very stimulating write.
One correction I might suggest is change "seen" to "saw" in the first line.
Very stimulating write.
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9th Jul 2013 2:04pm
Ah, thank you for the correction :)
Music was being made...with instruments from God ;)
Thank you for reading JAZZ!! :-)
Music was being made...with instruments from God ;)
Thank you for reading JAZZ!! :-)
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9th Jul 2013 2:12pm
I like the way you put that---isn't it nice when all the instruments are in tune?
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9th Jul 2013 11:28pm
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12th Jul 2013 1:33am
Finger banging hmmm happy fingers
very nice Leopard undies, shit you make me wanna roar tommielynn great write
very nice Leopard undies, shit you make me wanna roar tommielynn great write
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17th Jul 2013 11:45pm
The best part about this poem is picturing you getting off... Very well written.
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