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A Splash Of White
Our flesh a fresh canvas
we splash into one another
mixing our silky liquids
together
I surrender sweetly to you
as you slide over me
fingertips explore my
wondrous curves
you want to quench your
lustrous thirst deep
inside me
I want to drink from your
sweet desire as you
float above me
we splash into one another
mixing our silky liquids
together
I surrender sweetly to you
as you slide over me
fingertips explore my
wondrous curves
you want to quench your
lustrous thirst deep
inside me
I want to drink from your
sweet desire as you
float above me
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Re: A Splash Of White
8th Jul 2013 3:31am
whew! damn! youve definately been sexifying you're pieces lately...love this and the rest of them ;-)
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8th Jul 2013 10:22am
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Anonymous
8th Jul 2013 4:13am
Nice write tl...strider!
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8th Jul 2013 10:23am
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Anonymous
8th Jul 2013 6:17am
Great sensuous stanza:
"Our flesh a fresh canvas
we splash into one another
mixing our silky liquids
together"
"Our flesh a fresh canvas
we splash into one another
mixing our silky liquids
together"
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8th Jul 2013 10:24am
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8th Jul 2013 11:21am
my favor part of this is...THE WHOLE DAMN THING! l.o.l. awesome, sensual, hott spillage! :)
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Anonymous
8th Jul 2013 9:23pm
Really beautiful and sensual...especially
the last line...float above me...
the last line...float above me...
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