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You
I feel so fresh
I feel so new
see the sun shining bright
shimmering in the morning dew
let's roll around in the grass
just me and you
we could jump high in the sky
landing in the deep blue
maybe sit under the big elm
and listen to the cows go moo
catching sunrays in a bottle
what a beautiful view
touching the warm breeze
it tickles our outer soul
you make me feel so fresh and new.
I feel so new
see the sun shining bright
shimmering in the morning dew
let's roll around in the grass
just me and you
we could jump high in the sky
landing in the deep blue
maybe sit under the big elm
and listen to the cows go moo
catching sunrays in a bottle
what a beautiful view
touching the warm breeze
it tickles our outer soul
you make me feel so fresh and new.
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Re: You
Anonymous
8th Jul 2013 00:31am
A pastoral paradise painted in words.
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Anonymous
8th Jul 2013 00:52am
Wonderfully uplifting, enjoyed :) x
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Re: You
9th Jul 2013 2:37am
Very passionate.. I love the feeling expressed by this, I can almost imagine being there.. great write!
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2013 10:39am
now these are the types of invites I love to live for..clever, visually pleasant and flows like silky water..
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9th Jul 2013 10:51pm
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
9th Jul 2013 6:33pm
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