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You are strong ***
When you feel all alone
and at the end of your rope
don't hang your head down
don't give up, have hope
Remember you are strong
remember that you tried to lend a hand
you can help to prop someone up
but you can not force them to stand
Be proud of yourself, you did all you could
so many people would not even try
I know your heart is breaking now
you feel defeated and you want to cry
When you're feeling sad and blue
try to keep this in your mind
your a warm and caring person
and they're getting harder to find
I wish you strength and peace
I am proud to say we're family
I hope your spirit is lifted soon
I want you to be happy
***written to my cousin Antionette***
and at the end of your rope
don't hang your head down
don't give up, have hope
Remember you are strong
remember that you tried to lend a hand
you can help to prop someone up
but you can not force them to stand
Be proud of yourself, you did all you could
so many people would not even try
I know your heart is breaking now
you feel defeated and you want to cry
When you're feeling sad and blue
try to keep this in your mind
your a warm and caring person
and they're getting harder to find
I wish you strength and peace
I am proud to say we're family
I hope your spirit is lifted soon
I want you to be happy
***written to my cousin Antionette***
Written by
Deborahlee3313
(poetry in oceans)
Published 7th Jul 2013
| Edited 10th Jul 2013
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Re: You are strong ***
7th Jul 2013 6:55am
awee. so awesome. much love to her as well. this was a great tribute. hello there you . great job
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re: Re: You are strong ***
7th Jul 2013 6:57am
thank you so much for commenting
and for wishing her well
and hello there to you!!
and for wishing her well
and hello there to you!!
Re: You are strong ***
7th Jul 2013 7:46am
such amazing words to such a loving person! It is a very uplifting piece. that stanza where you said,
"remember that you tried to lend a hand
you can help to prop someone up
but you can not force them to stand"
I know all to well. awesome write!
"remember that you tried to lend a hand
you can help to prop someone up
but you can not force them to stand"
I know all to well. awesome write!
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10th Jul 2013 2:00am
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19th Jul 2013 11:04pm
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Re: You are strong ***
9th Jul 2013 5:23am
The people who help us heal and grow are the most beautiful of all ...
... This ink says a lot about you Deborahlee - your cousin is blessed.
LSP
... This ink says a lot about you Deborahlee - your cousin is blessed.
LSP
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19th Jul 2013 11:05pm
Re: You are strong ***
10th Jul 2013 12:45pm
great write and good luck to your cousin she will be ok because you are there for her
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19th Jul 2013 11:06pm
Re: You are strong ***
19th Jul 2013 11:06pm
wanted you all to know that my cousin is following the comments made and would like you all to know that she appreciates your kind words
as do I
as do I
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Anonymous
21st Jul 2014 4:25am
Beautiful tribute to your cousin and very good advice. I luv the pic. Your words are just what I needed to hear tonight. Thank you for the share. RL for me. Xo :)
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