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Is it over?
white" _mce_style="margin-bottom: 5.0pt; line-height: normal; background:
white;">we started out great
talked everyday for a couple month's
little did we know that we would run out of things to say
I guess this inferno has been turned to a amber
soon it will be extinguished
I just wished we had more time
I wrote your name on books
the one's which i knew you would look
for the times we fought
I named a scar in honour of it
trying to remember all the bad times we had
if only we had some
there isn’t a day that goes by when I don’t think of you
I just lay down and wonder
do you ever think of me?
Is it just over?
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Published 27th Nov 2010
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27th Nov 2010 5:51am
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27th Nov 2010 9:26am
30th Nov 2010 1:19am
27th Nov 2010 10:48am
im sorry to hear that heartthrobbxx
nice poem but try adding metaphors in your poems to make them more interesting!
nice poem but try adding metaphors in your poems to make them more interesting!
30th Nov 2010 1:19am
27th Nov 2010 1:55pm
30th Nov 2010 1:19am
29th Nov 2010 8:46am
I really like this, You've put a lot of thought into it and it has a lot of depth ^^
30th Nov 2010 1:20am
