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re: Re: ENOUGH
1st Jul 2013 9:23pm
Re: ENOUGH
1st Jul 2013 9:29pm
The mystique of the words just have this energy
The goodbye tear
The cleansing complete tear
The new beginnings tear that is wiping the past way
Your writings are a cluster of awe and mystery
The goodbye tear
The cleansing complete tear
The new beginnings tear that is wiping the past way
Your writings are a cluster of awe and mystery
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re: Re: ENOUGH
1st Jul 2013 9:36pm
But still you recognize part of yourself inbetween the lines... right? Or so I wish... ;-)
Re: ENOUGH
2nd Jul 2013 2:48am
re: Re: ENOUGH
2nd Jul 2013 9:34pm
Re: ENOUGH
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2013 5:46am
Without the tear blinding, one can again look ahead.
You write such beautiful koans.
You write such beautiful koans.
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re: Re: ENOUGH
2nd Jul 2013 9:37pm
Re: ENOUGH
Dammit man!!! You had me reading this one twice too! *Note to self* Read all of Inkstitution's poems when not sipping wine. lol...
That one tear held a lot of pain; 'enough' to hold the soul hostage. Once released, the healing could begin.
I adore your work! Xo
That one tear held a lot of pain; 'enough' to hold the soul hostage. Once released, the healing could begin.
I adore your work! Xo
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re: Re: ENOUGH
2nd Jul 2013 9:40pm
Make note myself: make poems that fit with good wine. My next one will be the test. Lets toast if I succeed, ok? ;-)
Re: ENOUGH
2nd Jul 2013 10:21am
The first step always comes with the last tear. Wonderful beginning of the end Inkstitution.
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re: Re: ENOUGH
2nd Jul 2013 9:42pm
Re: ENOUGH
16th Jul 2013 4:53am
I absolutely love this. That last tear served as a ticket to a new journey, new triumph. Wonderful.....absolutely wonderful and once again the image connecting with the words made it even more powerful and beautiful.
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re: Re: ENOUGH
16th Jul 2013 11:59am
Thank you, lady! :-) It is so nice that even within a few words, I notice that you can relate to what I am trying to bring across. Thank you for liking my personal photography as amplifier (;o) for the words and viceversa. Big Kiss for that