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Staying In Bed-
Awake,
wide awake,
twisted,
fabric wrapped
around my body
strangling me,
the fan humming
and the a/c
blowing,
I should have
slept naked,
I'd still be
asleep,
maybe, the
thought of
coffee makes me
smile,
I'm not ready to
get up yet,
but the coffee
isn't going to
brew itself,
then I realize today
is his birthday,
fifteen,
damn it went so
fast,
staying right in bed
is sounding a lot
better to me
wide awake,
twisted,
fabric wrapped
around my body
strangling me,
the fan humming
and the a/c
blowing,
I should have
slept naked,
I'd still be
asleep,
maybe, the
thought of
coffee makes me
smile,
I'm not ready to
get up yet,
but the coffee
isn't going to
brew itself,
then I realize today
is his birthday,
fifteen,
damn it went so
fast,
staying right in bed
is sounding a lot
better to me
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Re: Staying In Bed-
1st Jul 2013 10:45am
Their birthdays tell us of our passing youth....but then aging is only for the hard core...
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1st Jul 2013 10:47am
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 11:41am
Coffee indeed tl...
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1st Jul 2013 2:42pm
Birthdays n coffee, just don't go well... Move over I'm hoppin in!! We'll get a ciggy n coffee later after our... Lol ;)
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1st Jul 2013 5:16pm
I'm sure it wont sound too pleasant to him lol! You probably needed strong brew the way your day seemed like it was going to go lol!
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1st Jul 2013 5:25pm
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 5:55pm
I can totally relate to this...wonderful stuff. Now get that party planned, mom!
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1st Jul 2013 7:12pm
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 10:57pm
I'm thinking you've probably planned a party or two before...maybe even some spontaneous partying :)
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Re: Staying In Bed-
1st Jul 2013 8:18pm
"and the a/c blowing" - what's that a/c? (Not to be confused with AC/DC.)
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1st Jul 2013 9:00pm
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