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A Simple Yet Complex Love Poem
lover of my soul
why did you leave
you left me
you left me
blind
in the dark
i beheld your beauty
as one does an aurora borealis
i was just a star gazer
gazing through a telescope
you were the stars
so luminous and vibrant
oh my beloved
why did you depart
why did you leave
you left me
you left me
blind
in the dark
i beheld your beauty
as one does an aurora borealis
i was just a star gazer
gazing through a telescope
you were the stars
so luminous and vibrant
oh my beloved
why did you depart
Published 1st Jul 2013
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1st Jul 2013 6:13am
1st Jul 2013 8:55pm
4th Jul 2013 11:11pm
Yep, to the point. Which is good. I put women on a pedestal, and I always will. You too, perhaps. I don't think it's wrong.
5th Jul 2013 1:54am
yeah i agree, haha kind of a bad habbit or maybe not. not really sure what to think of that. thanks for the comment.
