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THE SIGN OF THE CROSS
everyone looks
so angry
so cross
I mentally
cross myself
cross over
the road
to avoid them
they who look
so cross
and I
who must
have annoyed
them
so angry
so cross
I mentally
cross myself
cross over
the road
to avoid them
they who look
so cross
and I
who must
have annoyed
them
Published 30th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
30th Jun 2013 11:06pm
Wonderful wordplay
Good write
Write on
Kitty
Good write
Write on
Kitty
30th Jun 2013 11:36pm
Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 1:54am
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2nd Jul 2013 7:34am
Well, all I can say is the spacing is exceptional, and the way you use it with the short bursts of speech, like a verbal form of stepping cautiously around something while trying to remain oblivious to said caution, above said caution--that's the feeling I get from it, is exceptional, and the way you end it off, and that cautious/aloof stepping around you take to get to the ending together are exceptional.
3rd Jul 2013 00:42am
Thanks so much. To have comments like yours
from a poet I admire is to feel happy. I do love
the gap between words and their sayers...
from a poet I admire is to feel happy. I do love
the gap between words and their sayers...
