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Where the Hollow Shadows Dwell
You foolishly underestimate me
I will smoke your remains
Breathe you into my lungs
Feel you evaporate into my veins
I'll take my bitter hands
Tear your heart out whole
Feel your pulse dissipate
Feast contentedly on your soul
In-caged inside my prison
I will send you to my hell
Gorging on your broken blood
Where the hollow shadows dwell
I will smoke your remains
Breathe you into my lungs
Feel you evaporate into my veins
I'll take my bitter hands
Tear your heart out whole
Feel your pulse dissipate
Feast contentedly on your soul
In-caged inside my prison
I will send you to my hell
Gorging on your broken blood
Where the hollow shadows dwell
Published 29th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
29th Jun 2013 3:42am
This was an enjoyable read.
29th Jun 2013 5:57am
Anonymous
29th Jun 2013 5:19am
Welcome to DU! What a deep dark write, enjoyed it! )
29th Jun 2013 6:00am
Thank you for welcoming me to DU! Very excited to be here! Much appreciated!
29th Jun 2013 10:44pm
Damn...just raw, thorough and laid flat...sick piece :-) glad to have you SoulStorm...
1st Jul 2013 5:11am
Thank you! Your comment made me laugh, I found your wording very witty! Can't wait to read what you have written!
30th Jun 2013 9:36pm
Omfg
That was friquin awesome!!!
Could u get any better than this
NOPE
Sure u can beat ur own record tho...
:-)
That was friquin awesome!!!
Could u get any better than this
NOPE
Sure u can beat ur own record tho...
:-)
1st Jul 2013 5:09am
Wow, you are so kind to say that! Your poems are awesome too! You are a very talented writer!
3rd Jul 2013 10:28pm
