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Nothing Left
She was sent to punish me
She did her job quite well
She had no other motivation
As far as I can tell
She was sent to maim me
The scars she left run deep
Though she gave me fleeting joys
That I could never keep
She brought me swift destruction
Calamity and woe
And such bittersweet memories
I never could let go
She left me there to suffer
A slow and painful death
As sorrow ate away at me
Till there was nothing left
She did her job quite well
She had no other motivation
As far as I can tell
She was sent to maim me
The scars she left run deep
Though she gave me fleeting joys
That I could never keep
She brought me swift destruction
Calamity and woe
And such bittersweet memories
I never could let go
She left me there to suffer
A slow and painful death
As sorrow ate away at me
Till there was nothing left
Published 28th Jun 2013
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28th Jun 2013 7:11pm
Ohh. Love the flow, I believe in poetry that rhymes and scans. Let's have some more. Great stuff and very succinct.
28th Jun 2013 7:19pm
28th Jun 2013 11:22pm
'Nothing left' to say but, I'm so glad you're back writing!:)
Truly a beautiful piece my friend!
"She brought me swift destruction
Calamity and woe
And such bittersweet memories
I never could let go" <---lovely lines
Keep grinding your pen~
Truly a beautiful piece my friend!
"She brought me swift destruction
Calamity and woe
And such bittersweet memories
I never could let go" <---lovely lines
Keep grinding your pen~
1st Jul 2013 2:00am
28th Jun 2013 11:47pm
I have to say this is such a heartbreaker but I s it bad that I enjoyed from start to fi Ian and didn't want it to end this was a pleasure to read thanks for sharing
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