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Re: BROKEN HALO
25th Jun 2013 7:30pm
Ahhh
your poetry excites me & pisses me off
So much captured in so little words
makes it awesome
it pisses me off cos' of the mystery it has to it
excuse me for being greedy and wanting more
lol good write
your poetry excites me & pisses me off
So much captured in so little words
makes it awesome
it pisses me off cos' of the mystery it has to it
excuse me for being greedy and wanting more
lol good write
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re: Re: BROKEN HALO
25th Jun 2013 8:25pm
LOL!!!
I do apologize for aiming for that response...
LOL!!!
But I do thank you for that too
;-)
I do apologize for aiming for that response...
LOL!!!
But I do thank you for that too
;-)
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25th Jun 2013 7:53pm
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25th Jun 2013 8:26pm
Re: BROKEN HALO
Anonymous
25th Jun 2013 8:07pm
BEAUTIFUL
Pure and heartfelt words....I imagine a stain fallen from your ink where this poem emerged from....GREAt write! Inkstitution!
Pure and heartfelt words....I imagine a stain fallen from your ink where this poem emerged from....GREAt write! Inkstitution!
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re: Re: BROKEN HALO
25th Jun 2013 8:28pm
Re: BROKEN HALO
25th Jun 2013 8:08pm
I love this. We often lose our wings but find the strength to fly again. Beautiful ink.
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re: Re: BROKEN HALO
25th Jun 2013 8:29pm
The strong ones always do. The less fortunate need our warm assistance...
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25th Jun 2013 9:49pm
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25th Jun 2013 9:51pm
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26th Jun 2013 00:12am
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26th Jun 2013 2:34pm
Thank you! 'Conveyed' what a lovely word... My English is improving here. I might use it in future work!
Thanks ;-) Also for enjoying my post
Thanks ;-) Also for enjoying my post
Re: BROKEN HALO
26th Jun 2013 2:25am
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26th Jun 2013 2:35pm
Re: BROKEN HALO
26th Jun 2013 2:28pm
Within the depths of 'DARKNESS'...(evil), the innocent seem to fall the hardest--the deepest. But time, love, (and acceptance) bring the Light to heal the 'wings' of broken spirits.
Touching...(an almost poignant plea) Felt this one, soul-deep.
Touching...(an almost poignant plea) Felt this one, soul-deep.
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26th Jun 2013 2:36pm
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Anonymous
27th Jun 2013 11:16am
I love this. I paint and take photographs so I really appreciate the stunning visuals! Mystery and simplicity a challenge but you made it work. I'm new to this site so I only have a couple poems up but you should check them out.
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