AnonyMuse

Boyyyyy stop
For you start something
Lol

I didn't dare to post a visual on this one... ;-)
But maybe it touched your senses even without

And I didn't dare ask for one
 I can only imagine
   Go deeper

LOL, well if you insist... There is an image especially made for this, but I do think I should leave this one to your own imagination. And passion. Hope you agree

No picture needed
It's already deep


And she moans ...go deeper
    Into that zone

Lol

Like this writing is fun ;-)

Sexy and romantic with a little charm
....loving the title!

Thank you. I tried to describe past the sex to the stage of actually sharing and making love. But still keep it sexy and hot. Hope I came close

The first stanza is definitely better than the second in my opinion. The imagery is very sensual. There's a great deal of subtle eroticism here. The only thing I can think of in terms of improvement is that the second stanza appears to be more a list of random thoughts rather than a constructive piece. Maybe that's something to work on.

Much enjoyed though, purely for the images it produces in my mind. The title is very clever also.

Thank you for the read.

Wow! Thanks for your reflection and advise. Always welcome! But most of all for sharing what it did to you. The vivid imagination is what I hoped to achieve. This time without the combination of image and words I like to use. Glad you enjoyed it!
Ink

How wonderful it is to be intuned with your lovers body... To feel and taste and see what's not visible to the eye.

Mmmmmm, you're fucking SEXY...

Pen On!!!!

Wow: thank you!!! ;-)
This might be a good moment to 'warn' you that I have already some waiting to be published here... but all in balance. Before you think I'm not getting any... LOL

LOL, I can't wait.

Try Gluttony or Untamed... if you can't wait ;-)