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Lights Out,Maybe~
That electric neon light is flashing
in my window
closed...
it's time to hit the hay, turn in, call
it a night, light's out mother fucker
I wonder if I'll get lucky
fucked...
damn, I think I will
he's ready,
rock hard...
he has his bedroom eyes on
looking at me like he could
fuck me where I stand
yeah...
I'll smash the lamp,get the light
off he can pound me
gloriously ...
but tonight he wants the light
left on, he wants to see
everything...
in my window
closed...
it's time to hit the hay, turn in, call
it a night, light's out mother fucker
I wonder if I'll get lucky
fucked...
damn, I think I will
he's ready,
rock hard...
he has his bedroom eyes on
looking at me like he could
fuck me where I stand
yeah...
I'll smash the lamp,get the light
off he can pound me
gloriously ...
but tonight he wants the light
left on, he wants to see
everything...
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Re: Lights Out,Maybe~
Anonymous
23rd Jun 2013 6:40am
irresistible you! You just carry own light along wherever you go :) Even if you turn it off I'll bet you can fire it up again with your passion
Sensual write ;)
Sensual write ;)

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23rd Jun 2013 2:38pm
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23rd Jun 2013 2:38pm
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23rd Jun 2013 8:17am
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23rd Jun 2013 2:39pm
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2013 11:16am
Another night of visuals tl...

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re: Re: Lights Out,Maybe~
23rd Jun 2013 2:40pm
Re: Lights Out,Maybe~
An interesting difference to overcome - you want it off, he wants it on!
Could sense the difference in pace of desire in the last half-dozen lines.
Could sense the difference in pace of desire in the last half-dozen lines.
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re: Re: Lights Out,Maybe~
23rd Jun 2013 2:41pm
Re: Lights Out,Maybe~
Anonymous
24th Jun 2013 3:41pm
tommielynn,
You need to get rid of the 'closed' sign, it keeps throwing me off! LOL!!! Enjoyed the read especially the right where you stand idea! ; )
tornado
You need to get rid of the 'closed' sign, it keeps throwing me off! LOL!!! Enjoyed the read especially the right where you stand idea! ; )
tornado

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re: Re: Lights Out,Maybe~
24th Jun 2013 4:25pm
Hehee...sorry tornado, closed meaning I was done for the night..but if he wanted to fuck me I wouldn't stop him!Fucking me where I stood would have been so hot! ; )
Thank you, I love when you comment ;))
Thank you, I love when you comment ;))
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24th Jun 2013 6:47pm
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