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Every Tomorrow
What if I could trade all my
tomorrows for a yesterday
Making deals for thrills and
excitement for one day
A playdate with him doing
anything he wanted to me
Colors would blast out of
me crashing all over him
Just to hear his voice
to feel his kisses on me
I'd trade every tomorrow
for a long slow yesterday
tomorrows for a yesterday
Making deals for thrills and
excitement for one day
A playdate with him doing
anything he wanted to me
Colors would blast out of
me crashing all over him
Just to hear his voice
to feel his kisses on me
I'd trade every tomorrow
for a long slow yesterday
Published 22nd Jun 2013
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Anonymous
22nd Jun 2013 4:51pm
twisty tl...strider
22nd Jun 2013 5:04pm
This makes the case for really appreciating today.......http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eternal_return
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Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Jun 2013 6:03pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Jun 2013 9:24pm
22nd Jun 2013 9:23pm
I'm all about the future baby!!;D But, yes, there are definitely things in my past that I wouldn't mind reliving ;)
That's exactly why I like this poem,,,it makes the reader ponder the happy times in our past
That's exactly why I like this poem,,,it makes the reader ponder the happy times in our past
23rd Jun 2013 4:45am
Do-overs would be great....but looking forward to the future is so exciting!! Thanks lerdgoin ;)
22nd Jun 2013 9:52pm
A sensuous request, to be able to "play it again, man" (to parody the Casablanca line).
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