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curse wretched
venom of words and essence of malice
seven drops mixed into this chalice
the moon bleeds a ruby red
the stars vanished, evil mist
strips of dignity, shorn and shredded
nightmares, terrors, all that’s dreaded
with the devil’s talon stir it blacker
it bubbles and hisses, acid kisses
throw the flames greener, higher
let jealousy fuel this cursed fire
here is regret crushed to powder
come now, sisters, stings and blisters
the vial of vileness is now sealed
scalps and eyelids pretty peeled
closer, closer, sweet, fair maiden
trust milk thistle, wet your whistle…
entered in the 'witching hour' comp
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Re: curse wretched
22nd Jun 2013 1:11am
Unexpected was this write-but indeed Your trademark biting write:)-excellent
Good luck in the comp!!!
Good luck in the comp!!!
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26th Jun 2013 6:09am
Re: curse wretched
22nd Jun 2013 1:22am
this is a clever brew Atakti!!! a witch of witches I see.. good luck in the comp. peace Crim
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Anonymous
22nd Jun 2013 2:58am
Great potion ataki... good luck!
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22nd Jun 2013 8:18pm
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Anonymous
22nd Jun 2013 10:40pm
The perfect potion! Classic rhythm, fantastic Witchcraft!
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2013 12:59pm
Strong vivid write, good luck in the comp!
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Anonymous
24th Jun 2013 7:02pm
Stirring & provocative write, Atakti. Love the poem. Good luck in the comp. :)
*Peace & Love* Carlene
*Peace & Love* Carlene
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26th Jun 2013 6:16am