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Blasphemy
Full of pain, trying to keep sane
This life is like a maze, I wish it were a phase
I hang my head in shame as things just aren’t the same
These walls are subsiding, our hearts are colliding
This sanctity is blasphemy, and soon will perish
My heart is full solitude, I can’t take another feud
Your soul is like ice, I just wish it could suffice
This life is like a maze, I wish it were a phase
I hang my head in shame as things just aren’t the same
These walls are subsiding, our hearts are colliding
This sanctity is blasphemy, and soon will perish
My heart is full solitude, I can’t take another feud
Your soul is like ice, I just wish it could suffice
Published 21st Jun 2013
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21st Jun 2013 7:25pm
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2nd Feb 2014 9:12pm
This is a different style oo poetry from what I read.
I like it and I love your pen name keep writing
I like it and I love your pen name keep writing
2nd Feb 2014 9:15pm
28th Mar 2014 10:00pm
Real good combinations of words that rhyme, you chose them well. I enjoyed the time reading what you did here. A real good poem if you ask me.
28th Mar 2014 11:22pm
