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Done & Gone
I'm on top
you can't bring me down
you try
but you're a fucking clown
I'm a rough
bitch, can't you see
there's nothing
you can do, no stopping me
when you treat people like shit
don't complain when that's what you get
that Jekyll and hyde act is old
I can't pretend that your heart isn't cold
I've suffered for too long
this time I'm done I'm gone
you can't bring me down
you try
but you're a fucking clown
I'm a rough
bitch, can't you see
there's nothing
you can do, no stopping me
when you treat people like shit
don't complain when that's what you get
that Jekyll and hyde act is old
I can't pretend that your heart isn't cold
I've suffered for too long
this time I'm done I'm gone
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Re: Done & Gone
21st Jun 2013 6:46pm
Aaaaawww my dear sweetness, this is sad... I hope this isn't for real... :(
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Anonymous
21st Jun 2013 7:05pm
Yep spit it out tl
strider!
strider!

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21st Jun 2013 7:17pm
Re: Done & Gone
Anonymous
21st Jun 2013 7:13pm
Tommielynn, having read your comment in response to Poetikmind, I am relieved that this piece is just a write and not a good bye :( :)
I appreciate the strength and resolve exhibited in this piece...you're a bad ass ya know?
I appreciate the strength and resolve exhibited in this piece...you're a bad ass ya know?

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Anonymous
21st Jun 2013 8:07pm
tommie,
Maybe for future reference...; ) Keep on dishing it!
tornado
Maybe for future reference...; ) Keep on dishing it!
tornado

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21st Jun 2013 8:09pm
Re: Done & Gone
21st Jun 2013 9:57pm
I must agree I thought you were telling someone off with this one. Glad to know it is simply just a write and not fact.
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21st Jun 2013 10:53pm
Re: Done & Gone
21st Jun 2013 10:12pm
Reads like the kind of poem you could have entered for the ongoing competition "Talk someone down from the ledge" (those in which the would-be suicide is talking).
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