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The Beat Down

My heart
(thu-thump..thu-thump)

beating my blood through
my living form
(thu-thump..thu-thump)

it's ruined now.
by the same car crash..
that hurt you bad...
(thu-thump..thu-thump)

the only thing..
that keeps it going
(thu-thump..thu-thump)

is the small chance that you'll survive.
(thu-...thu..thu-thump...)

My heart stutters when i hear the awful news...
why have you left me?
I just have to say...
(thu-....thu-...)

I loved you.
(..............................)
Written by HollyJay
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