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His Gift
He holds me so gently within his hands as he caresses my legs and thighs...the persuasion of his love guides them open to a sweet landscape of passion ....there will be no hidden places this time for he will consume the sweet essence that lies before him...he moves gently and softly against the pink petals with his tongue bringing my desire to a fury...he intensifies with his searching for the special place where the smooth firm pearl lays and I am shameless in using him...his jaws press down as he feels my body tense, he has found that special place, soon now my love , ecstasy approaches us.... he is unrelenting in his pleasure, he is intent in my fullfillment as I am so willing to comply concentrating and quiet now I press then in a single moment cry out in satisfaction...this is his gift to me, but in this he finds more pleasure than I...
By R Fuller 11/18/2010
By R Fuller 11/18/2010
Published 18th Nov 2010
| Edited 19th Nov 2010
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18th Nov 2010 5:24pm
18th Nov 2010 5:31pm
19th Nov 2010 11:01am
I enjoyed this a lot. A vivid expression of female orgasm. My greatest pleasure is in making a woman reach climax.
This narration is great.
This narration is great.
19th Nov 2010 1:49pm
thank you, this is truely a wonderful gift from him to me and is enjoyed by us both :)
25th Apr 2014 8:49pm
I enjoyed the journey this poem took me on. I felt the passion in your words. Good write.
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