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GIRL OF ASTROLOGY
I could make you mine.
manipulate your zodiac.
Numbers fall in line.
Make you love the maniac.
Iris petal blue,the better you,unsettled truth I love you
Comfort comes the stars,to touch us all,to fuck and awe I love you.
I will make you sing.
Arrange the light to make me pretty.
Pull insecure strings.
Like rainbow colored drugs for hippies.
Lilac scent of rain,to tempt again,and vent the pain I love you.
Lover battle wounds,addict for you,so sad,I'll always love you.
It's sad,I'll always love you.
so sad I'll always...
Love.
manipulate your zodiac.
Numbers fall in line.
Make you love the maniac.
Iris petal blue,the better you,unsettled truth I love you
Comfort comes the stars,to touch us all,to fuck and awe I love you.
I will make you sing.
Arrange the light to make me pretty.
Pull insecure strings.
Like rainbow colored drugs for hippies.
Lilac scent of rain,to tempt again,and vent the pain I love you.
Lover battle wounds,addict for you,so sad,I'll always love you.
It's sad,I'll always love you.
so sad I'll always...
Love.
Published 17th Jun 2013
| Edited 22nd Jun 2013
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17th Jun 2013 2:34pm
...And to a l l who have known the emotional intensity of love unrequited....its brief moments of ecstasy--in physical, and imagined contacts--its endless sorrow that creates desperation...'madness'.
One would manipulate time and space--alter the future--to have that love returned.
In these lines your imagery is so vivid...almost wistful : "...Iris petal blue, the better you...."/ "...Lilac scent of rain, to tempt again, and vent the pain, I love you...." (my fav, to be sure.) Truly enjoyed this one, my friend!
( And your conclusion....sadly, LOVE is practically a paradox.)
Sioch`ain leat,
Enchantress
One would manipulate time and space--alter the future--to have that love returned.
In these lines your imagery is so vivid...almost wistful : "...Iris petal blue, the better you...."/ "...Lilac scent of rain, to tempt again, and vent the pain, I love you...." (my fav, to be sure.) Truly enjoyed this one, my friend!
( And your conclusion....sadly, LOVE is practically a paradox.)
Sioch`ain leat,
Enchantress
17th Jun 2013 9:10pm
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