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Her Eyes
I search into Her Eyes of Perfect Blue,
As if Just to gaze at color of No Greater Hue.
To You and Me,
To Know at All,
Is that eyes don't lie for they're windows to the Soul.
Told i was of Millennia Past,
of the war for her innocence,
How Brave,
Honorably,
Valiantly her 7 Daemons Shielded her from the Wicked Angels
Moiling to Rape her of her Essence.
Told i was of how I'm Beloved the Last of her 7,
How All my Brethren have Fallen in Battle Before us.
The Blood that Drenches me and is Fully Mistaken for Holy,
The Filthy Lies Sprouting Forth from Wretched Lips Mistaken for Truth,
Enrage and fill me with Supreme Fury!
Bite my Tongue and Spite my Fear, You Linger in my Heart.
By The Artist's Token of War Clenched in my Fist, I Will Protect Her and Guide Her Home!!!
Because i see it in Her Eyes.
(Daemon-A Mischievous and Protective Entity or Being) (Moiling-Trying Hardest) ("Token of War"-Weapon of Any Kind)
As if Just to gaze at color of No Greater Hue.
To You and Me,
To Know at All,
Is that eyes don't lie for they're windows to the Soul.
Told i was of Millennia Past,
of the war for her innocence,
How Brave,
Honorably,
Valiantly her 7 Daemons Shielded her from the Wicked Angels
Moiling to Rape her of her Essence.
Told i was of how I'm Beloved the Last of her 7,
How All my Brethren have Fallen in Battle Before us.
The Blood that Drenches me and is Fully Mistaken for Holy,
The Filthy Lies Sprouting Forth from Wretched Lips Mistaken for Truth,
Enrage and fill me with Supreme Fury!
Bite my Tongue and Spite my Fear, You Linger in my Heart.
By The Artist's Token of War Clenched in my Fist, I Will Protect Her and Guide Her Home!!!
Because i see it in Her Eyes.
(Daemon-A Mischievous and Protective Entity or Being) (Moiling-Trying Hardest) ("Token of War"-Weapon of Any Kind)
Published 14th Jun 2013
| Edited 26th Feb 2015
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14th Jun 2013 9:32pm
Is that eyes don't lie for they're windows to the Soul.
so true
great job
welcome to the DU!!
so true
great job
welcome to the DU!!
14th Jun 2013 9:44pm
Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 9:43pm
Welcome to DUP! Beautiful write. Really enjoyed! :)
14th Jun 2013 9:50pm
Thank you, I've never gotten such praise for my poems cause most people don't get them.
17th Jun 2013 4:33pm
I think all of us here at, DUP can appreciate the beauty, elegance and insight of this poem. Is was a magnificent piece.
I noticed that you're into the, "Norse
Religion." I also enjoy studying that. It's
actually very exciting and makes a lot of
sense.
I noticed that you're into the, "Norse
Religion." I also enjoy studying that. It's
actually very exciting and makes a lot of
sense.
Anonymous
20th Jun 2013 3:52pm
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Thanks i Moiled to find the right Font...haha, see what i did there! sorry, i know it's not funny.
22nd Jun 2013 4:45pm
I keep hearing Blind Guardian in my head when I read your work.
Steller ink, welcome to the nut house.
Steller ink, welcome to the nut house.
7th Aug 2013 6:40am
Wow funny you should say that the FIRST Poem i EVER wrote was titled "The Blind Guardian"... I've never been able to remember it because the book fell into a puddle a year or two before High School.
Thank you so much, i think this is a Sign to try Again to rewrite that what was Lost.
I write what i dream about and it was about a Blind man walking somewhere with a broken Viking "Ulfberht" Sword missing the top 3rd of the blade.
A inscription on both sides missing the last word saying:"Feel with your S..."
And the other side saying:"See with your H...."
Only in a second dream did it reveal its
"Feel with your Soul" and "See with your Heart".
Thank you so much, i think this is a Sign to try Again to rewrite that what was Lost.
I write what i dream about and it was about a Blind man walking somewhere with a broken Viking "Ulfberht" Sword missing the top 3rd of the blade.
A inscription on both sides missing the last word saying:"Feel with your S..."
And the other side saying:"See with your H...."
Only in a second dream did it reveal its
"Feel with your Soul" and "See with your Heart".
