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SENSUAL OASIS
DEEP
TIGHT
WET
HOT
PINK
JUICY
PLUSH
N
RIGHTEOUS
WITH A BIASED
BACKDOOR
PREFERENCE
FROM WHICH
YOUR GUESS
IS AS GOOD
AS MINE
Written by
OyateInyanNajin
Published 14th Jun 2013
| Edited 31st Dec 2023
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Re: SENSUAL OASIS
Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 7:35pm
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Thanks Amanecio, great to hear you love it!..
Now about that last word, it just kind of popped up in my head right as I had almost finished writing the next to the last word & it arrived, because, just at that instant an old favorite song of mine from many years ago (Z.Z.TOPS - "HOT, BLUE & RIGHTEOUS", off their early 'TRES HOMBRES' album came on in my head & so I threw that word in, as a nod to ol' Z.Z. & because the first time I ever heard that song, I had driven up to Austin, Texas with a buddy of mine to basically go out partying all weekend (hey, what can I say, I was in my early 20's!) & let just say I got very drunk, but also VERY lucky! And so up to that time, this was the most intensely hot, erotic, wild, fantasy come true 'hook up & mind-blowing F**k of my life! And it happened on a cold winter night, on a real bear-skin rug (honest to God!), in front of a crackling fire place, add to that the two glasses of wine & some pretty good weed we had indulged in, just before getting down to it & then under the influence & anticipation of all that & the idyllic atmospherics of the room, right at the very moment I began my deep descent & slowly sinkin in, this song came on & let's just say I rode both 'grooves' out at the same time & it was all so unbelievably 'PERFECT' (!!!!!!), that to this day, every time I hear 'HOT, BLUE & RIGHTEOUS' come on anywhere, I virtually re-live every magical moment of that prolonged two hours in front of that fire!!!... So, you were dead-on when you said in your comments, "The last word gives a Special Wall Of Feelings!...Literally & in more ways than one!!!... Sorry if that's a bit too much information, but that's how synchronistic & accurate your comment was, so I felt compelled to fill you in on just why it is!!!... (btw, if you have never heard Z.Z. Tops song, 'HOT, BLUE & RIGHTEOUS', it's worth at least one good listen & I'm certain you can find it on You Tube... If you should check it out, when you hear the whole of it (mood, words, sound & feel), it will add a whole other dimension of experiential & aural perspective that together with my written descriptions above, will more accurately & lucidly paint a clearer picture of that night, which with that song in mind I have now condensed & compressed it's collective essence into this simple, little nine word poem!...
Now about that last word, it just kind of popped up in my head right as I had almost finished writing the next to the last word & it arrived, because, just at that instant an old favorite song of mine from many years ago (Z.Z.TOPS - "HOT, BLUE & RIGHTEOUS", off their early 'TRES HOMBRES' album came on in my head & so I threw that word in, as a nod to ol' Z.Z. & because the first time I ever heard that song, I had driven up to Austin, Texas with a buddy of mine to basically go out partying all weekend (hey, what can I say, I was in my early 20's!) & let just say I got very drunk, but also VERY lucky! And so up to that time, this was the most intensely hot, erotic, wild, fantasy come true 'hook up & mind-blowing F**k of my life! And it happened on a cold winter night, on a real bear-skin rug (honest to God!), in front of a crackling fire place, add to that the two glasses of wine & some pretty good weed we had indulged in, just before getting down to it & then under the influence & anticipation of all that & the idyllic atmospherics of the room, right at the very moment I began my deep descent & slowly sinkin in, this song came on & let's just say I rode both 'grooves' out at the same time & it was all so unbelievably 'PERFECT' (!!!!!!), that to this day, every time I hear 'HOT, BLUE & RIGHTEOUS' come on anywhere, I virtually re-live every magical moment of that prolonged two hours in front of that fire!!!... So, you were dead-on when you said in your comments, "The last word gives a Special Wall Of Feelings!...Literally & in more ways than one!!!... Sorry if that's a bit too much information, but that's how synchronistic & accurate your comment was, so I felt compelled to fill you in on just why it is!!!... (btw, if you have never heard Z.Z. Tops song, 'HOT, BLUE & RIGHTEOUS', it's worth at least one good listen & I'm certain you can find it on You Tube... If you should check it out, when you hear the whole of it (mood, words, sound & feel), it will add a whole other dimension of experiential & aural perspective that together with my written descriptions above, will more accurately & lucidly paint a clearer picture of that night, which with that song in mind I have now condensed & compressed it's collective essence into this simple, little nine word poem!...
Re: SENSUAL OASIS
Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 7:59pm
hmmm....now what was this about oin....?
ha ha yum
strider
ha ha yum
strider

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re: Re: SENSUAL OASIS
15th Jun 2013 3:45am
..."take your pick!?!"...
- OIN...(or in this particular case, perhaps I should alter my screen name's acronym by adding one more letter...'K' at it's end?!!!...
- OIN...(or in this particular case, perhaps I should alter my screen name's acronym by adding one more letter...'K' at it's end?!!!...
Re. SENSUAL OASIS
18th Mar 2018 7:38am
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Re: Re. SENSUAL OASIS
I completely agree with you!?!?!?!?!?!
But only to jokingly patronize you, because 'whatever' it is you tried to communicate, express and/or say to me in your comment's response here, made absolutely 'NO' Fucking sense at all???!!!??????????????????!!!???
But only to jokingly patronize you, because 'whatever' it is you tried to communicate, express and/or say to me in your comment's response here, made absolutely 'NO' Fucking sense at all???!!!??????????????????!!!???