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Does He Think Of Me~
I wish he knew how hungry I am for him
how his scent tickles on my tastebuds
making my mouth water
wondering if he aches for me in sensuous
ways he can't help but touch his growing
delicates thinking about me
picturing his slow steady movements
my own swollen delights beckon my
touch thinking about his invasion
my desire to be taken over by his lust
filled with his fury sinking my nails
into his flesh in pleasure
I tremble as my excitement heightens
knowing he will cum for me spasmodically
I hope he whispers my name
how his scent tickles on my tastebuds
making my mouth water
wondering if he aches for me in sensuous
ways he can't help but touch his growing
delicates thinking about me
picturing his slow steady movements
my own swollen delights beckon my
touch thinking about his invasion
my desire to be taken over by his lust
filled with his fury sinking my nails
into his flesh in pleasure
I tremble as my excitement heightens
knowing he will cum for me spasmodically
I hope he whispers my name
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14th Jun 2013 4:03pm
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14th Jun 2013 4:33pm
Re: Does He Think Of Me~
14th Jun 2013 5:02pm
I'm sure he does with the way you write! This is a great piece of steamy erotica, my delicates even grew a bit ;) haha I thought that wording was clever as well as swollen delights!
Other hot lines I liked:
"he can't help but touch his growing
delicates thinking about me"
"picturing his slow steady movements"
"thinking about his invasion"
Nice!
Other hot lines I liked:
"he can't help but touch his growing
delicates thinking about me"
"picturing his slow steady movements"
"thinking about his invasion"
Nice!
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re: Re: Does He Think Of Me~
14th Jun 2013 9:13pm
Love it DF.....got you all excited didn't I!!! ;))))
I mean well, you know that! ;)
Thank you
I mean well, you know that! ;)
Thank you
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14th Jun 2013 9:25pm
I have to admit you did, Tommie! I mean, excited about, um, poetry! ;) What were YOU thinking?!
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14th Jun 2013 5:52pm
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14th Jun 2013 5:53pm
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14th Jun 2013 9:14pm
Re: Does He Think Of Me~
14th Jun 2013 6:00pm
OF COURSE i do! l.o.l. but yea like others have said who wouldn't l.o.l.... very hott lady, n fear not i'm betting ur guy is floating on a cloud somewhere with ur photo taped to his heart l.o.l.
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re: Re: Does He Think Of Me~
14th Jun 2013 9:16pm
Hahahaaaa....floating somewhere but probably not on a cloud...lmfao!Thanks poetikmind :))
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 6:24pm
nice write tl...strider
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14th Jun 2013 9:17pm
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 10:15pm
ToooooooommieLyyyyn! Just give him that come hither stare and he's yours :) Beautiful piece!
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14th Jun 2013 10:35pm
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 11:29pm
Have you tried the kiss-a-peach trick?:)
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15th Jun 2013 00:52am
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Anonymous
15th Jun 2013 1:02am
I think we've done the lab teat..time to try out that fucker
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Anonymous
15th Jun 2013 5:55am
I wrote lab teat...once again with the tits albeit animal style
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Anonymous
15th Jun 2013 1:51am
This was terrific! Love the wordplay and damn! what a steamy poem! Well done, chere!
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15th Jun 2013 2:02am