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The Dark
Sitting in the dark, I beckon you to come drink from the well of my youth... Come lie with me and explore the raw sexuality of our passionate beings, do you feel it, the orgasmic rage building within your inner self, do you hear it, the heartbeat pounding melody’s of rhythm intertwining whispers of want and need...Sup with me in my pleasure of a lovers game and I will fulfill you with an everlasting kiss...
By R Fuller 11/15/2010
By R Fuller 11/15/2010
Published 15th Nov 2010
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17th Nov 2010 10:59am
but the prose is kinda weak or too passive for the thought you're trying to imply... maybe it's just me... i still like it though :)
17th Nov 2010 3:36pm
17th Nov 2010 8:37pm
17th Nov 2010 8:55pm
thank you very much, just thought I would try something alittle different :)
