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Bored Of You !!!
Most of the breakups happen this way
One gets bored and other has to pay
Its the fake trend which all wanna follow
Do not care if it makes relation hollow.
No love for people, for who they really are
Only looks and sensual aspect drives the car
I feel gross seeing this love for lust
Hoping for the days with smile and trust.
Don't let yourself be treated as a doormat
Where any one can come with filth to play at
They dirty your soul and take the exit
Those fucking cheaters keep adding on in their list.
Bastards who use girls will continue doing so
Whores will remain whores, no solution though
"Real Love" is begging for its survival and trace
But its usually cremated with no breathing place.
Written by
Brinda
(Leenaa)
Published 12th Jun 2013
| Edited 13th Jun 2013
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Re: Bored Of You !!!
12th Jun 2013 12:18pm
I enjoyed this Brinda! :)
Your rhyme scheme was nicely delivered and the message in your poem, rocked!
Peace&Pens~
Your rhyme scheme was nicely delivered and the message in your poem, rocked!
Peace&Pens~
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re: Re: Bored Of You !!!
12th Jun 2013 12:27pm
Re: Bored Of You !!!
12th Jun 2013 12:47pm
Yea, what rain said! lol
Also it reeks of a person with bad taste in their mouth
from a love gone sour.
Also it reeks of a person with bad taste in their mouth
from a love gone sour.
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re: Re: Bored Of You !!!
13th Jun 2013 6:03am
Yeah ! Thats what I am seeing around me these days and troubling me to an extent :!
Thanks for sharing your views :)
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2013 12:51pm
A sad truth well written.
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13th Jun 2013 6:04am
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2013 1:07pm
nicely penned frustrations..good job!
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13th Jun 2013 6:04am
re: Re: Bored Of You !!!
13th Jun 2013 6:07am
Happy that you liked it.
What you said is justified. Though you cant stop all this to happen but beware of such trap !
Re: Bored Of You !!!
12th Jun 2013 1:58pm
Typo? Exist-exit??
There wasn't a need to push that extreme button really :)
nice poem, your message loud and clear.
There wasn't a need to push that extreme button really :)
nice poem, your message loud and clear.
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re: Re: Bored Of You !!!
13th Jun 2013 6:10am
Yeah ! Was a typing error and I modified..!
Thanks for stopping by and commenting :)
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13th Jun 2013 9:04am
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13th Jun 2013 9:24am
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14th Jun 2013 1:46pm
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Re: Bored Of You !!!
9th Aug 2013 11:21am
Your perceptive ability and resultating wisdom is normally applied to a much older (and more experienced) person. I love your insightful poems. Well done!
Chi
Chi
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9th Aug 2013 12:57pm
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29th Oct 2013 10:12am
"Real Love" is begging for its survival and trace
But its usually cremated with no breathing place. –made d feeling of morn...d truth s always like dt...
But its usually cremated with no breathing place. –made d feeling of morn...d truth s always like dt...
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29th Oct 2013 10:15am
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29th Oct 2013 11:59am
Reality s real even ugly but u nd words walks in d path of truth nd sensibility..lol
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30th Oct 2013 7:36am
when d reality nd mystic world marry each other…art erupts with as was happened in d dark cave art in ancient era…
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