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No Lies
Broken hearts lay
with twisted minds
Unveiling ourselves
to truth and honesty
Only one promise to
be made,passion
Not wanting anything
else in this affair
Surrendering sweetly
to precious touch
No regrets,lies won't
be told tonight
Just irresistible invasions
of our submissions
with twisted minds
Unveiling ourselves
to truth and honesty
Only one promise to
be made,passion
Not wanting anything
else in this affair
Surrendering sweetly
to precious touch
No regrets,lies won't
be told tonight
Just irresistible invasions
of our submissions
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Re: No Lies
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jun 2013 9:51pm
8th Jun 2013 9:50pm
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re: Re: No Lies
8th Jun 2013 9:59pm
My point in this poem..no promises, no I love you, no pick me, pick me ...just upfront I wanna fuck!You wanna fuck then just fuck!That's all! hahaa..I always appreciate you commenting Gabriel thank you ;)))
Re: No Lies
Anonymous
9th Jun 2013 2:33am
I love your clear cut reasoning...must be the NY in you..."Hey you, yeah you with the bulge..inside me now capiche"
"We've got tonight. Who needs tomorrow? We've got tonight babe. Why don't you stay?"
Well done! Favorite line: "Only one promise to
be made,passion"
"We've got tonight. Who needs tomorrow? We've got tonight babe. Why don't you stay?"
Well done! Favorite line: "Only one promise to
be made,passion"

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re: Re: No Lies
9th Jun 2013 1:51pm
LMFAO, I can be aggressive. Just so you know I sang that sentence like 3 times :) ha ha
thanks lerdgoin ;)
thanks lerdgoin ;)
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2013 7:00pm
If I can bring a song to your lips...my work here is done ;) But did you dance to it? Here's my agression "Can we, I mean if you want to, I mean if it's not an imposition, would you like to you know fa fa fudguck"

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9th Jun 2013 7:15pm
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2013 7:32pm
I'll pick a snappier tune next ;)

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9th Jun 2013 7:34pm
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2013 9:24pm
How about,
"Love exciting and new
climb aboard
We're expecting you
The Love Boat..."
"Love exciting and new
climb aboard
We're expecting you
The Love Boat..."

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9th Jun 2013 9:30pm
That's hilarious!! Hehee ;-) it will be stuck in my head all night now...hahahaaa!
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2013 9:41pm
I'm glad you got that one. I was concerned that you were too young. Wouldn't you just love one of those cruise ship horns to blow when you reach orgasm ;)

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9th Jun 2013 9:46pm
How old did you think I was?I would love one of those horns,I'd blow that fucker during orgasm...at 3am ...while I was checking the mail...my neighbors...not so much, but they're assholes anyway...;)
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2013 9:50pm
From your picture you look like 28. Now I'm gonna cream my jeans every time I hear that sound :P

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9th Jun 2013 9:56pm
Christ, how often do you hear that sound??Cream away my friend..cream away! ;)
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2013 10:09pm
Well I'm a cruise ship dock worker so....I'm kidding

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9th Jun 2013 10:15pm
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2013 10:18pm
Who says I wash them :P

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9th Jun 2013 6:29am
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Re: No Lies
Anonymous
9th Jun 2013 10:10am
Deep truths tl...strider

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