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If You smell it, I'm smoking it
cloudy haze
Smokey daze
m
o
k
e
Dreams...
in blown glass.
Calm
h
i
l
Listening
to
life float by.
Welcoming numb
i
t
h
Open heArt
Open Arms
High
o
p
e
f
u
l
Loving
life
Cloudy daze
Smokey haze
m
o
k
i
n
g
Dreams in blown glass
r
i
Forever
Into
n
g
nothingness.
Soft lips
Gentle kiss
t
elated
r
n
a
Love
Bliss
u
r
n
i
n
g
Emptiness
s
m
o
k
haze
y
Cloudy
Daze
Smoking
Dreams
in
b
Live
o
w
n
g
Life
a
s
Stoned
Smokey daze
m
o
k
e
Dreams...
in blown glass.
Calm
h
i
l
Listening
to
life float by.
Welcoming numb
i
t
h
Open heArt
Open Arms
High
o
p
e
f
u
l
Loving
life
Cloudy daze
Smokey haze
m
o
k
i
n
g
Dreams in blown glass
r
i
Forever
Into
n
g
nothingness.
Soft lips
Gentle kiss
t
elated
r
n
a
Love
Bliss
u
r
n
i
n
g
Emptiness
s
m
o
k
haze
y
Cloudy
Daze
Smoking
Dreams
in
b
Live
o
w
n
g
Life
a
s
Stoned
Published 8th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
8th Jun 2013 00:39am
LOVE the placement here!
8th Jun 2013 1:22am
Cleverly done acrostic n very cool 'dazed imagery' like a mrllow dreaminess dipped in ink... :)
Anonymous
8th Jun 2013 2:07am
Cool write that caught your meaning well river lily!
strider
strider
8th Jun 2013 8:13am
Very nice write Riverlily it basically describes the feeling of being high....
8th Jun 2013 5:38pm
Thank you so much for posting this here. Your magnificent. I might steal this idea n make my own version.. if i can. Nice write
8th Jun 2013 6:59pm
9th Jun 2013 11:27am
Understandable why so many go there if this is what the journey is like.. Felt it in your beautiful words Lily.
10th Jun 2013 5:01am
Such an amazing piece. I loved the concept of the placement of the words. Keep up the great writing! You always write such amazing pieces!
