deepundergroundpoetry.com

DT and his Long Board
My boy Dylan Thomas
he's sort of a goofball
he gets that from his
mother
All day he talks about
music and groups he
likes and his next big
tattoo
He can sound like that
fucker Hank Hill and
he can make his eyebrow
wave
No matter what he always
gets his momma laughing
sometimes with just the
look on his face
This kid spent $200 on
that fucking long board
he's holding in his
hand
But he looks very smooth
as he's cruising down the
road on it even if he hikes
up his pants
he's sort of a goofball
he gets that from his
mother
All day he talks about
music and groups he
likes and his next big
tattoo
He can sound like that
fucker Hank Hill and
he can make his eyebrow
wave
No matter what he always
gets his momma laughing
sometimes with just the
look on his face
This kid spent $200 on
that fucking long board
he's holding in his
hand
But he looks very smooth
as he's cruising down the
road on it even if he hikes
up his pants
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 3
reading list entries 0
comments 14
reads 746
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
Re: DT and his Long Board
7th Jun 2013 5:19pm
Re: DT and his Long Board
7th Jun 2013 5:38pm
re: Re: DT and his Long Board
7th Jun 2013 5:59pm
Re: DT and his Long Board
Anonymous
7th Jun 2013 8:02pm
cool write tl...humorous too
strider :)
strider :)

0

re: Re: DT and his Long Board
7th Jun 2013 9:34pm
Re: DT and his Long Board
7th Jun 2013 9:17pm
Wondered what a Long Board (nearly misread as 'long beard'!) was - what we called Skate boards when they came in the 70s. Wonder how the original (boozy) Dylan Thomas would have managed a board?
0

re: Re: DT and his Long Board
7th Jun 2013 9:37pm
Long boards are pretty neat!All the kids around here have one!I think the original Dylan Thomas would have rode one well after a few spills of course!
Thank you SS :)
Thank you SS :)
Re: DT and his Long Board
Anonymous
7th Jun 2013 9:58pm
I was expecting a surfer piece first...I had mu kowaaaaaaabunga!! all ready....well there I just said it. This guy seems like a kick, I can just hear the Hank. You're not a Texan, by chance?

0

re: Re: DT and his Long Board
7th Jun 2013 10:29pm
Kowabunga dude!He's a pip for sure!!I'm not from Texas...but I've been through there..lmao!
Thanks lerdgoin
Thanks lerdgoin
re: re: Re: DT and his Long Board
Anonymous
7th Jun 2013 10:38pm
I've been through Texas stopped to set a spell, okay a spell that's lasted 8 long years ;) But I'm from Cali Kowabunga land dudette.

0

re: re: re: Re: DT and his Long Board
7th Jun 2013 11:27pm
re: re: re: re: Re: DT and his Long Board
Anonymous
8th Jun 2013 5:55am
Did I say 8? I mean't 12 long and hard years :0 Upstate NY cool! It seems really pretty there. My dad was born in Castiles.

0

re: re: re: re: re: Re: DT and his Long Board
8th Jun 2013 12:30pm
Re: DT and his Long Board
8th Jun 2013 1:11pm
Wow, this funny n I felt the love too! lol
nice lil story n hey if he's good on that board
then maybe he should compete? the world is ALWAYS looking for the NEXT Tony Hawk! :)
nice lil story n hey if he's good on that board
then maybe he should compete? the world is ALWAYS looking for the NEXT Tony Hawk! :)
0
