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Look Of The Lion
Growing up with
these beautiful
beasts was incredible
Nobody else in town
had lions
Eyes of amber
slowly it clambers
golden mane
falls from it's frame
jaws of power
makes anything cower
pure muscle
but it can hustle
Their beauty was
magnificent
something
magical,they
were fearless
with a thunderous
roar
Lion days end
heart did mend
in stars I trace
Leo's strong face
remembering him
how he would grin
nugging for a hug
with his handsome mug
these beautiful
beasts was incredible
Nobody else in town
had lions
Eyes of amber
slowly it clambers
golden mane
falls from it's frame
jaws of power
makes anything cower
pure muscle
but it can hustle
Their beauty was
magnificent
something
magical,they
were fearless
with a thunderous
roar
Lion days end
heart did mend
in stars I trace
Leo's strong face
remembering him
how he would grin
nugging for a hug
with his handsome mug
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Anonymous
6th Jun 2013 6:45pm
Nice write tl...strider...
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6th Jun 2013 9:55pm
Reminds me of Aslan, the Lion character in C S Lewis' Narnia tales, not a monster but a good guy character.
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Anonymous
7th Jun 2013 00:16am
I love this! Did you actually live with lions? I think this would make a great children's book. I love the versatility you show with this piece.
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7th Jun 2013 00:43am
It was my best friends parent's , they lived next to me from kindergarten to seventh grade!I was there almost everyday!They were great people...loved those lions so much!And fought everyone in town just so they could keep them!
Youre right...This would make a great children's book!Thank you very much! :-)
Youre right...This would make a great children's book!Thank you very much! :-)
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Anonymous
7th Jun 2013 00:57am
What a cool, unique experience. Yeah just find yourself an illustrator and I think it would do well. Believe I have read my share of children's books
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