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Bottom of a bottle
can't spit out what I feel
too many emotions
rolled into little ole me
i've tried talking to friends
even drunk myself into happiness
a thousand times in one week
only thing that did
was show me there is no truth at the end of a bottle
just a temporary fix
because when I looked in the mirror
it was the same old me
with the same old problems
and no solution
too many emotions
rolled into little ole me
i've tried talking to friends
even drunk myself into happiness
a thousand times in one week
only thing that did
was show me there is no truth at the end of a bottle
just a temporary fix
because when I looked in the mirror
it was the same old me
with the same old problems
and no solution
Published 2nd Jun 2013
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2nd Jun 2013 9:43pm
"can't spit out what I feel
too many emotions
rolled into little ole me"
this bit I like... expand on this more.
that damn bottle...
too many emotions
rolled into little ole me"
this bit I like... expand on this more.
that damn bottle...
2nd Jun 2013 9:45pm
I know I might take this down and rewrite some more! But that's the thing I can't spit anything out lol idk what I wanna say
But Ty xoxo
But Ty xoxo
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Jun 2013 2:11am
3rd Jun 2013 00:57am
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3rd Jun 2013 1:24am
Anonymous
- Edited 19th Jan 2021 4:45am
3rd Jun 2013 11:58am
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3rd Jun 2013 3:00pm
3rd Jun 2013 1:53pm
The Bottle is our great
I-Me-My Me'dicine....
a wonderful place
I canno express how bless'd I feel by encountered The 'Worst' of My Life, thee most insane & death-defying times, after managing to get sober 26yr ago....thru no doing of My Own, no 'gifts' from Jesus(orBuddha,Allah,Krisna,or Dr.Phil)
&,like....like so what, yknow?
I-Me-My Me'dicine....
a wonderful place
I canno express how bless'd I feel by encountered The 'Worst' of My Life, thee most insane & death-defying times, after managing to get sober 26yr ago....thru no doing of My Own, no 'gifts' from Jesus(orBuddha,Allah,Krisna,or Dr.Phil)
&,like....like so what, yknow?
3rd Jun 2013 2:59pm
Haha dr Phil! That man annoys me lol Ty Daniel xoxo and 26 without a drink eek I'd be sad lol
3rd Jun 2013 6:28pm
"26 without a drink eek I'd be sad lol "
be most willing to bet you'd get over sad'sober unto glad'sober
within
a few short years
butt wadd aye know?
from shit,that's what! arghhhhh
be most willing to bet you'd get over sad'sober unto glad'sober
within
a few short years
butt wadd aye know?
from shit,that's what! arghhhhh
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
4th Jun 2013 10:02am
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4th Jun 2013 2:05pm
Anonymous
6th Jun 2013 3:27pm
Damn this speaks on so many different levels.
If anything this poem is something like a cautionary tale, and I like it!
If anything this poem is something like a cautionary tale, and I like it!
6th Jun 2013 8:16pm
14th Aug 2013 5:37pm
"only thing that did
was show me there is no truth at the end of a bottle"
I've tried this also. Great write sweetheart
was show me there is no truth at the end of a bottle"
I've tried this also. Great write sweetheart
14th Aug 2013 7:18pm
