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CRAVING !!!
Everyday dying to hear your voice
No more melodies I actually rejoice
You went away leaving me with no choice
I wish you were not as cold as ice.
No clue for where have you been
These Last three years you went unseen
I missed you more with each passing day
I wish you had never turned away.
Memories flash for the times together
Spent our days cuddling in the cold weather
The precious I felt everytime you held my hand
Now only left with ashes of the beautiful life we had planned.
Yes, I crave for your soothing sound
The crave to have one glimpse around
I crave for your subtle magical touch
I crave for the feel of being loved so much.
No more melodies I actually rejoice
You went away leaving me with no choice
I wish you were not as cold as ice.
No clue for where have you been
These Last three years you went unseen
I missed you more with each passing day
I wish you had never turned away.
Memories flash for the times together
Spent our days cuddling in the cold weather
The precious I felt everytime you held my hand
Now only left with ashes of the beautiful life we had planned.
Yes, I crave for your soothing sound
The crave to have one glimpse around
I crave for your subtle magical touch
I crave for the feel of being loved so much.
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Re: CRAVING !!!
30th May 2013 1:08pm
...an intense longing can be a beautiful Craving!
Lovely spill, Brinda! Xo
Lovely spill, Brinda! Xo
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re: Re: CRAVING !!!
31st May 2013 5:31am
Re: CRAVING !!!
30th May 2013 3:05pm
Um uh, Interesting, I can relate to this on so many different levels. Similar things has transpired in my never ending quest to find true unconditional love, in which I to crave for!! Awesome piece!!
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re: Re: CRAVING !!!
31st May 2013 5:32am
I wish you get that unconditional true love :)
Thanks for sharing your feelings ! Happy you liked it :)
Re: CRAVING !!!
31st May 2013 11:30am
so lovely! *comes to running to give you another tight hug* :P
you'll find him, i know that much :)
you'll find him, i know that much :)
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