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Left behind
We explored our vision of love makin'
Soaring with passion, in a naked fashion
A night that would last forever, in memory
memories that are near and dear to me
Cause I know what we had was real, magical
And touched the pits of my soul, beautiful
Like warm tears dripping from the heavens itself
Raining down, making my lonely heart melt
Until it was ripped apart, and scattered across the lands
Leaving behind a wave of emotions I couldn't understand
And months of misery, after realizing the truth
And about the other guy she ran too
Soaring with passion, in a naked fashion
A night that would last forever, in memory
memories that are near and dear to me
Cause I know what we had was real, magical
And touched the pits of my soul, beautiful
Like warm tears dripping from the heavens itself
Raining down, making my lonely heart melt
Until it was ripped apart, and scattered across the lands
Leaving behind a wave of emotions I couldn't understand
And months of misery, after realizing the truth
And about the other guy she ran too
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Re: Left behind
1st Jun 2013 5:11pm
Such brutality in a love that has died
"Raining down, making my lonely heart melt
Until it was ripped apart, and scattered across the lands"<--Deep! Xo
"Raining down, making my lonely heart melt
Until it was ripped apart, and scattered across the lands"<--Deep! Xo
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Re: Left behind
1st Jun 2013 6:06pm
@Rain For some reason, I cant let the situation go, no matter how hard I try to!! Its like I'm suck in the same years, shedding the same tears!! Weired, I know!!!
Re: Left behind
2nd Jun 2013 9:03pm
Oh my goodness, this story struck a cord in my own heart. And that last line...the more passion in the beginning, the deeper the hurt during the aftermath. Powerful write.
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Re: Left behind
2nd Jun 2013 10:34pm
Thank you...I wanted to keep going, but I couldn't! the deeper it got, to harder it was!