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HAIKU! Haiku you too!
~this is a form piece (haiku) that was
written for my lil girl
when I saw how much like me she was
in relation to her martial arts, she's
very passionate about it! Lol~
Princess, so priceless
Perspicacious little miss
Passionate she is..
written for my lil girl
when I saw how much like me she was
in relation to her martial arts, she's
very passionate about it! Lol~
Princess, so priceless
Perspicacious little miss
Passionate she is..
Published 25th May 2013
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25th May 2013 2:46pm
26th May 2013 4:23am
25th May 2013 3:49pm
26th May 2013 4:33am
Trust me dude, neither am I!
BUT every mow n again I decide to do a form poetry
Piece just to exercise my creativity n poetic voice lol
I'm happy to hear this met ur approval :)
BUT every mow n again I decide to do a form poetry
Piece just to exercise my creativity n poetic voice lol
I'm happy to hear this met ur approval :)
Anonymous
25th May 2013 3:55pm
A lovely tribute to your daughter, Poetikmind. One of the sweetest Haiku writes I've seen! :)
Carlene
Carlene
26th May 2013 4:35am
Wow what an awesome thing to say! Thank you!
Grateful always for ur support :)
Grateful always for ur support :)
25th May 2013 6:22pm
26th May 2013 4:40am
Thank u, I don't lol
BUT I'm not one who won't try n grow as a writer
so i go about creating ink that hopefully evolving n versatile is something I'm absolutely all about :) appreciate :)
BUT I'm not one who won't try n grow as a writer
so i go about creating ink that hopefully evolving n versatile is something I'm absolutely all about :) appreciate :)
26th May 2013 1:27am
26th May 2013 4:44am
Anonymous
26th May 2013 6:59am
Very sweet and loving.
Like the Yoda quality of the last line, too.
Like the Yoda quality of the last line, too.
26th May 2013 1:12pm
Aaawww Star Wars fan huh? lol
I Thank u babe, appreciate ur support always :)
I Thank u babe, appreciate ur support always :)
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