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A New You
Say you wanna find better you
won’t you tell me what you plan do?
do you wanna wash away the negative
as you find something within yourself to give
Won’t you tell me what you plan to do?
do you wanna wash away the negative
as you find something within yourself to give
recognize your worth, see you have value too
Do you wanna wash away the negative
as you find something within yourself to give
recognize your worth, you have value too
positive change yields positive gains it’s true
As you find something within yourself to give
recognize your worth, see you have value too
this is just an example for a life in which to live
because as you say, you wanna find a better you…
won’t you tell me what you plan do?
do you wanna wash away the negative
as you find something within yourself to give
Won’t you tell me what you plan to do?
do you wanna wash away the negative
as you find something within yourself to give
recognize your worth, see you have value too
Do you wanna wash away the negative
as you find something within yourself to give
recognize your worth, you have value too
positive change yields positive gains it’s true
As you find something within yourself to give
recognize your worth, see you have value too
this is just an example for a life in which to live
because as you say, you wanna find a better you…
Published 24th May 2013
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24th May 2013 2:50pm
24th May 2013 2:56pm
thank you, it's a form poetry piece called Rotourne, BUT n i emphasis that, I'm so into my own style n always breaking 'poetry's rules'
that i admit it's NOT exactly by the book! l.o.l.
that i admit it's NOT exactly by the book! l.o.l.
24th May 2013 3:00pm
There is something familiar in this piece, no you see it now you don't, things that make you go hmmm? Nice!
Red
Red
24th May 2013 3:11pm
lol yea i thing familiar thing is ME l.o.l.
j.k... it's another MY STYLE 'rotourne form...
thanks sweetie so much :)
j.k... it's another MY STYLE 'rotourne form...
thanks sweetie so much :)
24th May 2013 3:22pm
24th May 2013 5:44pm
Thank you, happy you liked this n yea on occasion I try n say something worth saying lol... Appreciate u sweetness :)
Anonymous
24th May 2013 6:43pm
New to me, a Rotourn. The repetition & the emphasis works so well. Much wisdom in this fine piece. Thanks for sharing, Poetikmind! :)
Carlene
Carlene
24th May 2013 7:07pm
Yea I've had alot of people tell me they never heard of it
including myself until when I saw it first n then inquired about
learn the 'rules' n then promptly "broke" them just a wee bit lol
Thank u n im happy u liked this my friend :)
including myself until when I saw it first n then inquired about
learn the 'rules' n then promptly "broke" them just a wee bit lol
Thank u n im happy u liked this my friend :)
24th May 2013 6:44pm
24th May 2013 7:13pm
24th May 2013 9:46pm
"As you find something within yourself to give
recognize your worth, see you have value too
this is just an example for a life in which to live
because as you say, you wanna find a better you"
^^^^ Deep! Rain likes this! Xo
25th May 2013 1:51pm
Thank you Rain, happy you liked this ink,
guess it didn't turn out as cheesy as I thought lol
appreciate ur support always :)
guess it didn't turn out as cheesy as I thought lol
appreciate ur support always :)
25th May 2013 3:18am
Poetic scroll on a serious roll!!!Diggin the way you unfolds this truth...a perfect balance of unique artistry and substance that feeds the spirit...
25th May 2013 1:56pm
Glad it fed ya bro! thank you n happier still i had something 'fortifying' to feed you. Appreciate u dude :)
28th May 2013 12:17pm
28th May 2013 12:48pm
I'm happy it is my friend, if I can't get laughs, sighs, panting breaths, I'm happy to inspire! lol
Grateful as always my dear :)
Grateful as always my dear :)
