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Story: Walking Hand in Hand Through the Marshland Part 1

(Note from Author: It's a long one folks! And it's only part 1)


      Moonlight shown through the cypress trees on the crisp fall evening.  The French moss glowing and swaying with the wind.  Shadows dance all around to the rhythm of the frog and crickets' song.  Owls wake for their evening feed, as the sparrows bed down for the night.  The waters of the bayou look black, like glass, mirroring the few stars peaking through the branches.  
     
      A soft breeze cools your skin.  I hold you close for the warmth and affection.  I love any excuse to hold you in my arms.  We walk through the soft leaves, headed back to the cute little cabin we rented for the week.  Nothing extravagant, just 4 walls, a roof, stove and fridge. bathroom, and bed.  The bare minimum is all we need. I stoke the fire in the old wood-burning stove to fight the chill.  You take a blanket from the beautiful cedar chest at the foot of the bed, and lay it on the floor near the warmth.  We lay on our stomachs facing each other.  

     Staring into each others eyes, listening to light jazz from a small radio.  No words are spoken aloud, but so much is being said.  We speak for a while using only our expressions.  I take my time committing every one of the colors in your amazing eyes to memory.  The warm fire bathes you in a soft light that only makes you more radiant.  I reach out to stroke your silken skin.  Your check is warm and soft to the touch.  I lean in and place a soft kiss on your delicate lips.  My body tingles from the simple touch, I must have another.  I lean in once more, but hold the kiss sets my heart on fire.  Love and passion consumes my entire being.  As you lay, I get to my knees and come to your side.  Gently, I lay beside, placing my arm around our shoulders. A nice snuggle is followed by a kiss to your temple, then another to your cheek.  I remove my hand from your shoulder and start softly rubbing around our back.  You moan slightly, letting me know that you approve of my actions.  You twist your head in such a way that you expose the nape of your inviting neck.  Who am I to turn down such an invitation?  I saturate the area with small kisses and licks.  Another little moan lets me know that I'm on the right path.  The atmosphere turns to the more passionate side of love.  I gently roll you to your back.  Long kisses turn from soft to more forceful.  Our tongues invade each others mouths, rolling and sliding together.  Your so beautiful and sexy!  I try to control myself.  We can take our time.

     I, reluctantly, break the kiss.  I stare into those magical eyes once more, then continue.  Only this time, I gather every bit of love and passion I have for you and try to communicate that through my lips. Every time I've said that I loved you, every hug, every laugh, every tear that we have shared I force into this on kiss. I want you to feel how much I love you, need you, and want you. After the kiss, I look at you to see if it worked.  By the slight tears in your eyes and the most loving smile I've ever seen, I think it did.

       We continue the kiss, as my hand begins to unbutton your blouse.  I pull the fabric to the sides, showing off your amazing bust in the firelight.  The milky, white skin, contrasting to the lacy black bra is breathtaking.  Watching your chest heaving in the pale light is making it very hard to control my instincts. You look at me, and let out a slight giggle, as I take in this awesome sight. I suppose I do look a bit silly, staring at your body with a bit of drool running down my chin.  Thankfully, the giggle breaks me from my trance.  I can't help but giggle at myself a little at this point.  Now, you know the power you have over me.  

     Using only my index finger, I trace the lines of you body.  I start at your lips and work my way down, slowly, to your neck.  Then Trace the collar bone, down to the breast plate.  I let the finger travel between your breast and under each, following the soft fabric of your bra.  Down your stomach to your cute navel, then coming to rest at the top of your slacks. I take my time unbuttoning and unzipping. I can, now, make out the top of your black cotton panties.  If I wasn't aroused before this, I am now! My colonel is trying to unzip my pants by himself!  You raise your hips enough for me to slide the pants off.  I stand and turn away just long enough to throw the pants onto a chair nearby.  When I turn back to look at you again, I know for a fact that I started drooling!

     Nobody on earth could have blamed me!  The sight of you, laying next to the fire, in just your bra and panties, being consumed by the yellow/orange light was enough to make a priest think about his vows... and break them! I would not have believed that I would ever get the chance to witness such beauty in my lifetime.  Sunsets are nice, mountains and pretty, the miracle of child birth is great, but you look like an angel on shore leave.  Seductive, but at the same time pure and innocent.  I take a moment to try and collect my thoughts, it isn't working! I have no clue what to do next!  You've gotten me so overwhelmed that my "train-of-thought" derailed! You sense my dilemma and come to my rescue.  

     You stand up and start undressing me!  You unbutton my shirt and pull it off my broad shoulders.  You rub your fingers through my chest hair, your touch is so soft it almost tickles.  You stand on tip-toes to kiss me as you loosen my belt.   You embrace me. Your soft warm body pressed against mine feels like heaven.

     You can't help but notice my erection throbbing in to your stomach.  You let your arms lower to my pants, and with one quick move, drop them to the floor... undies and all!  The surprise on my face is very apparent!  I did not see that coming!  I look at you, and there you are laughing your cute butt off, having scared me like that!  I giggle, then attack! Hugging, kissing, tickling, the whole nine yards.  We laugh as we wrestle to the floor.  A kiss brings back the sensuality in the room.  I realize quickly that you did all this on purpose!  You reminded me that your not just a beautiful Goddess of a woman, but your also my best friend and the goofiest person I know!  You knew that I was at a loss, so you brought me back. Thank you for that!

     I'm back in control of my body and mind again.  I'm now lying on top of you, holding my weight up with my arms.  You lean up and start kissing my neck.  I gently lower myself down to your body, careful not to crush you.  I place my hands at your sides and roll onto my back with you on top.  You sit up just in front of my groin.  I can feel a light wet spot on my stomach from your panties.  I can smell a slight hint of your lower perfume, it's driving me crazy.  You sit back adjusting your position.  When you do I can't help but slip a finger in the small space between us.  The wetness I gather on my finger makes it to my mouth in record time.  You taste remarkable!  You catch me as I'm pulling my finger out of my mouth, and giggle a bit.  You reach behind your back and unclasp your bra.  My whole body is tense with anticipation as you remove the article, exposing your magnificent breast to the firelight.  They're perfectly shaped, with nipples as hard as rock candy.  You drop back to my chest, this time with nothing between us.  I can feel your nipples pressing into me.  I've found heaven again.  

     You slip back a little as you come down fully. My penis is now resting firmly between your panty clad ass cheeks.  I damn near loose my mind at this point! You feel so good.  I can feel the heat from your vagina on my dick.  You decide that that is going to have to wait, as you pull yourself on to all fours above me.  You place one of your breast directly over my mouth.  Again… INVITATION ACCEPTED!  I take the tip of the beautiful orb between my lips and lightly start suckling on the firm nip.  Your breathing hastens as I increase the pressure and start working the nipple with my tongue.  I start rubbing your sides and ass as I continue manipulating your breast.  I hook my fingers into the soft waistband of your panties and start slipping them down your thighs.  You maneuver your legs so that they come off, without pulling your tits from my face.  Your pulse starts racing, you feel tingling all over your body.  Juice starts dripping on my stomach from your pussy.  My hands are caressing everything I can reach from your neck to your luscious ass, while staying focused on your wonderful tits.  After a while of switching back and froth between breast, you pull away having had a small orgasmic moment.  

     I make it known that I want you to move forward, by pulling on your thighs.  You oblige, but it's all muscle movement at this point.  Your mind is still enjoying the sensations from our breast.  You continue moving forward on all fours, until your delicious pussy is directly over my waiting mouth.  I lightly lick the lips, so I can taste you directly.  Your whole body shutters at the small lick.  You taste exquisite! My mouth starts watering…I must have more!  I position you so that I can easily access the entire area of your womanhood.

      I start by teasing the lips and clit with my tongue.  Flicking and teasing until the little nub is fully aroused.  The slightest touch starts sending shock-waves through your body! That's my favorite part!  Making you squirm with pleasure.  I begin licking a little harder and faster from the bottom to the top, letting my tongue flick upward at the end of the run.  Your body convulses with each repetition.  I linger at the opening, trying to force my tongue as far inside you as possible.  I'm Trying to drink your pussy dry.  I go back to your clit and start sucking and licking harder and faster until you cum harder than you thought possible. I quickly move my mouth back to your tunnel to drink as much of your delicious cum as I can.  Your juices cover my face as your pelvis works up and down, riding the waves of multiple orgasms.  My hands are pinching and rubbing your nipples to intensify the effect.  Along with grabbing your ass and helping you grind your box into my face and mouth. You collapse onto the floor beside me, your body trembling and shaking. Half laughing, half panting, squirming as far as you can away from me, afraid that I'll continue the onslaught. I'm not quite that evil!! I relish in your flavor, while you try to compose yourself. I hear soft snoring coming from your direction, and realize that you have passed out!! I made you pass out from an orgasm!!!! Pet My EGO!!!

     We will be staying here for a few days, so I gently pick you up and place you in the bed. I want to continue loving on you, but I decide to let you rest. You're going to need it! I spoon next to you, cover us with the blankets, and fall asleep with my face in the hollow of your neck. There will be more time to “play”! God help you when you wake!!!
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